|Reviews for Lelouch In Hell|
| Raina1 chapter 6 . 12/1/2013
That is just awesome... would have made a hell of a season three! Imagine Suzaku dies, goes to hell, finds out Lelouch is ruler, and goes, "You took over hell?!" And Lelouch goes, "What, like it's hard?" XD
| Epic Ebi chapter 6 . 5/26/2012
Brilliant. Just fucking brilliant.
This has to be one of the greatest fanfics I have ever read. I'm dead serious when I say this. Lelouch is characterised perfectly here, as well as Rolo and Shirley.
It's such a shame that you don't have the writing skills to continue the story. But then again, I like how this story turned out anyway; how it ended where you left it. It seems just fine as it is. It's a satisfying little read; something I can read when I have nothing better to do. Short stories work just as well as novel-length stories for me.
I don't want to take this story further, even though anyone's allowed to. I would just ruin the story if I took this on. So in short; I'm not touching this. I have other stories I'm working on anyway.
I like how you came up with the idea of putting Lelouch in Hell; a place he was more likely to go to anyway. It seems more natural than putting him in Heaven. Oh no; I'm an atheist, if you were wondering. But I don't hate stories where characters find themselves in the fictional world of reiligion. On the contrary; I enjoy them.
Getting back on track; I only found one or two mistakes in this story. But they're relatively minor (like forgetting to press a space bar). So I'm forgiving here because I love this story.
Overall; this is one of my favourite stories, and I'm glad I read it. Congratulations for making a masterpiece.
| sephiroth12285 chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
too bad you won't be finishing this story its quite good so far, but it makes me think of a scene from the web comic 8bit threater where Black Mage takes over hell.
"Even through I am the incarnaton of all mortal evils I just don't have the heart."
"So how was hell? I figured I should get ready?"
"Oh its great they got sins we don't even have names for yet."
A very fun scene and this story brought up those wonderful memories of that scene. But overall I liked what you had started with this fic...still its a shame you won't finish it.
| littlemissy3 chapter 6 . 4/25/2012
This is good, but what about Euphy? D: and everyone else who died, hating him? :
| Amortin chapter 6 . 4/23/2012
I may continue this story in my head, but I won't publish it without your consent (So please give it! :D )
once again... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
| OBSERVER01 chapter 6 . 4/23/2012
pity that you wont continue fear not i will spread the word that your fic (and the concept behind it)is up for power to you
| Zelouch vi Lamprouge chapter 6 . 4/22/2012
end? WHAT? NOOOO! Τ·Τ :(
it was just getting to the good part to. yet another lelouch in hell story with a disappointing end. i hope you reconsider and continue this but i will not get my hopes up.
on a side note, i noticed a lack of mention of kallen. why is that?
| azul120 chapter 5 . 4/12/2012
Lol, that is rich. Villetta attempted to use Shirley for her own gain, and only cared about nobility, while all the Japanese in her mind could rot. And yet she was one of the people who got the happy ending, even though she was responsible for sending Lelouch down his final path. (If it wasn't for her misinformation, the betrayal, and subsequently the Zero Requiem, very well would not have happened.) Besides, Lelouch had been fighting against Britannia's oppression at the time.
If this is bizarro Hell, nice job. Villetta (not to mention Cornelia and Ohgi) deserved it instead.
| OBSERVER01 chapter 5 . 4/12/2012
very lelouch is gonna conquer hell and literally be the demon emperor and get shirley into heaven?KEEP IT UP
| Raenvoll chapter 5 . 4/11/2012
I like this story, it amuses me to watch Lelouch attempt to take the moral high ground.
Even a demon has done less after all.
| UK - Underworld King chapter 4 . 3/26/2012
Ok... it seems I'll have to take back what I said about Lelouch not meeting other friends.
Oh, and by the way: what is Shirley doing in hell? She is one of the last people I would expect to see there! Ok, she shot Viletta, but she didn't kill her and considering she regretted that action and would probably not mind to reincarnated to atone for it. Or maybe there's something else to it.
Man, the plot thickens as they say. This is one messed up hell. So much you even meet people relatively innocent and that didn't deeserve to be there at all.
Also, have to agree with Lelouch: school sometimes is hell, but having a copy of yours in it is quite disturbing.
| Meroez chapter 4 . 3/26/2012
Quite good I look forward to the next one though hopefully it would arrive somewhat sooner your update time was ok but I simply kept looking forward to the next chapter so hopefully chapter 5 will be here soon.
| Amortin chapter 4 . 3/25/2012
I love this story/concept! I look forward to future chapters.
| AisloreIV chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Leave it to Lelouch vi Britannia to conquer even hell. xD
| Insert name here chapter 3 . 3/12/2012
WOW! I had actually been wanting to write a story with this exact concept! PLEASE continue! I love your writing (and the conecpt of Lelouch conquering Hell)!