|Reviews for Innocent Sinner|
| Forever-Buckskin chapter 5 . 8/2/2012
This is great so far! But L likeing misa misa that's awkward lol!
| xfang-girlx chapter 3 . 6/3/2012
The photo's were cute. :)
I have a feeling that Trevor is going to cause them some sort of trouble. :/
Can't wait until the next update!
| Netty chapter 2 . 4/1/2012
this is a really good story, im looking forward to more chapters (:
| xfang-girlx chapter 2 . 3/23/2012
It's good to see lots of interaction between L and Athena. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| xfang-girlx chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Nice first chapter! Interesting character past as well. Can't wait to see what do with this story.
For formatting I would recommend using breaks, just so it is easily recognisable when scenes change.
| jkdoesntcare chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Amazing story so far! I love the background concept between L and Athena. Plus I always enjoy a good thriller. Only thing I have to say if be careful when writing scenic with more than 2 people talking, because it was a little awkward and abrupt between speakers. Only slight though. Other than that, keep up the awesome work! I defiantly look forward to more! 3