Reviews for Rewritten Ending
Endles chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
That was sweet and lovely. I especially loved how Cyrus talked and the very last paragraph. One thing that puzzled me though, was that you'd marked italics like /this/. Wouldn't it be easier to just use them normally? The way you've used now kinda stands out in an akward way, if you understand what I'm trying to say. Anyway, it was a great fic. Thanks for sharing! :)