|Reviews for Mistakes|
| teabrows chapter 28 . 1/5
the part where bosses can influence (coughcoughbrainwash) nations.. what happens if there's a civil war or a revolution. let's say France's Revolution or Russia's Revolution? how does that work? it seems awfully convenient and a tad bit too much for bosses to have this much power.
| teabrows chapter 27 . 1/5
okay. just gonna say that this is too much justifying on japan's part. i can hardly believe that he would not know what they, his people, his own children, did to his brothers, his family. actually, the whole story is about this over justifying or whatever you call it. sure, it's admirable of japan on his supposed love to his family, considering they're at war, but this lack of knowledge again on his own population... just no.
| kagaminekorea chapter 27 . 9/6/2016
I'm crying... this touches me... particularly because I'm Korean myself...
Love your writing, and the story!
| kagaminekorea chapter 28 . 9/6/2016
Please continue! It's an interesting story, and you write so well!
I also particularly like it because there aren't many fanfics about the history of Japan, Korea, and China... I was very glad to find this one!
Please update! :)))))))))))))
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
Ehhh it was okay I have a fan fiction to I am Alaska turning to a micro nation even if I am not that small
| yhgtyjvfhh chapter 28 . 5/28/2014
dis is verry good cun u updated dis
| vivific chapter 28 . 2/10/2014
*cries for years* OH MY GOD NO THIS ISN'T WHAT I EXPECTED BUT GOD I'M GOING TO CRY I AM CRYING OH GOD I CAN'T PLEASE JUST
YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS FIC OKAY I NEED CLOSURE I CAN'T FREAKING UGH
| Guest chapter 28 . 1/7/2014
If you do not mind me asking, can you please update soon. this has been an exceedingly good fic and i am eagerly awaiting the next installment.
| Guest chapter 28 . 12/31/2013
The story is not bad, but may I point out that the characters are somewhat OOC?
| Guest chapter 28 . 9/29/2013
please, more, more i want more ... this is so great that i want more
| MafiaAngel chapter 28 . 7/14/2013
I'm actually quite impressed. Most folks don't know about Japan's Unit 731 or the artrotious shit they did. Part of the reason is because it was just one horrifying event in a WORLD WAR of horrifying events I suppose. Another might be the culture as well. I know talk about Ww2 is very hush hush in Japan, at least compared to Germany which doesn't shy away from the Holocaust (and also can't get away from the image/idea of Nazi. Ask anyone if they know someone famous from Germany and Hitler is bound to pop up) or the U.S. Or Britain.
Anyhoo I applaud your research for this. This topic is pretty dark and I think you were able to handle it well. The only mistakes I could see were the occasional lower cased 'I' when it should be a capital.
| allenx14 chapter 28 . 5/29/2013
so ... sad ... i want more ... it was amazing. i can't wait till the next chapter.
| Teganau chapter 28 . 5/19/2013
Wow... That's all I can say for the moment.
| Kristb2604 chapter 27 . 3/1/2013
I still want to kill Japan so keep on going. Even if you dont kill him I want to know what is going to happen next :)
| Shadow of the katana chapter 27 . 2/23/2013
I was really excited when I saw the alert, I thought it had been abandoned :3 Great chapter