Reviews for Sister
silverbirch chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
I got a bit confused at the start because I couldn't work out when the story was set. My first thought was that Andy had just died.

After that it got much better. Narcissa, after everything that happened, still questions who was right and who was wrong. I think part of her will always blame her sister, rather than try to understand her.

I liked the ending and where you cut. When that knock is answered the future will change, but we never find out what happens. Twenty people could write the next chapter and they will all be different. Leaving it to us is good.
Lmb111514 chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Oh my gosh, this was so sweet, I felt like crying! Can you continue this and put in the interaction between Andromeda and Narcissa. I'll understand if you don't because this was a great ending but I would love the story even more if you did.