Reviews for Breaking point
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Really nice. I like what you've done here. I'm starting to figure things out, but not enough that the plot is obvious, so that's cool. I like the mystery.

And older Danny with a biker look is pretty awesome. And I LOVE what you did with the name.

(there were a couple parts in first person that read a bit awkwardly, but nothing too bad)

So yeah, a really good premise. I think you should continue.

Sapphireswimming
Panhead13 chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Yes, continue :D I like it!
jeanette9a chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
I’m curious. I wonder what Danny's younger self will react?

And what kind of bad habits?