|Reviews for Heroes - Rebirth from the Ashes|
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/6/2015
The girl form, of the name Jesse, is spelled: Jessie.
Nice story, though.
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
George Washington and Benjamin Franklin?
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/6/2015
I am enjoying the story so far...
| pepperxxx chapter 27 . 10/5/2013
The storys really interseting and im enjoying it, but One thing I just wanted to say though is that Germans didnt say hail hitler, they said "heil" pronounced high-ll.
| oldblueeyes chapter 2 . 7/11/2013
To: Jalonso1021 - I hope you continue to read and enjoy the story. The first few chapters are full of action and kind of a reboot. A getting back to the Heroes basics and then moving forward with a core group like in season one.
| JAlonso1021 chapter 2 . 7/11/2013
I'm sorry. None of what happened in the first two chapters are in any way believable. I'm not sure I can continue to read this. I know the show wasn't perfect, but this is a little too farfetched.
| pepperxxx chapter 2 . 6/22/2013
Oh my god I'm hooked! The story is excellent, the grammar is ok but I'm going to stop reviewing so I can find out what happens next! :)
| kb4jc22 chapter 3 . 5/17/2013
I like it so far...just started a few minutes ago and on chapter 3. However some of the typos/grammatical errors are a little distracting.
| oldblueeyes chapter 31 . 4/3/2013
CAUTION - SPOILER ALERT - CAUTION - some of these reviews contain plot details - CAUTION - SPOILER ALERT - CAUTION
| QueenMismatched chapter 8 . 2/6/2013
Out of ALL of the bad guys you could've created/choosen, you picked HITLER?
| d706924 chapter 31 . 1/5/2013
Yeeep! I love this story! I especially like how the chapters are so action packed and how you gave a good insight into the background of each character. Can't wait for the next part of the story :) oh and the last line in chp 26 (?) absolutely cracked me up!
| julyisfree chapter 31 . 12/26/2012
Oh wow what ending!
First let me tell you how happy I'm that a Heroes story is now complete. Look, many just start big way and then suddenly stop, there is nothing most frustrating for me when that happens.
Second, THERE IS GONNA BE A SEQUEL?! YAY! I'm so psyched to hear that :D I'm going to love to see where you are going to take those characters from here and out.
Third, now I can comment this chapter in particular. The battle between Peter and Hitler was all the levels of epic as I was expecting it to be; I loved Hitler last lines "I knew it would be you. You were the only one I feared." Peter really grown up from that dreamer to this avenger. I enjoyed his character development.
Tracy and Noah was one of those things that take you by surprise, I mean in the show I was 'meh' about them but seeing them together here make me realize how perfect they are for each other, Tracy as the ice queen and Noah as the man of steel XD their kids would be epic.
Angela, oh god how I love this woman, writing form her POV is like seeing through a curtain of fog from everyone else, everything is blurred and dizzy but she can still see the things nonetheless. I love her security.
Molly, Noah Jr and Hiro, those kids; I personally wasn’t expecting for Hiro to stay in his child form but as an adult he was mostly like a kid so I guess is fine. Loved Kimiko's presence. Molly is another of those forgotten characters that are great to explore. I enjoyed the progression of her power through the story. Noah Jr one of your best twist, the question of 'who was the mother of Noah in that exposed future we saw in I'm become death' is one of the biggest for most of the fans (LoL we all wanted to know with who Sylar hooked up XD) and you gives an answer without recurring to any off putting ship or OC female, I applaud you for that.
The mansion staff, they were a nice addition and although I often avoid OC's (both writing them and reading them) I understand when they are absolutely necessary for a story.
and finally Claire and Gabriel, ok these two are my forever OTP and every slight sylaire addition always fills my heart with emotion, there is no doubts in my head that they are perfect for each other and though all of this is true I'm also grateful you didn’t rush things between them, you didn’t make them instantly in love with each other and you showed us the struggle within them. That's what I like about this ship, they have eternity, why rush things? And as for individual grown I loved that you started with Sylar and ended with Gabriel because he too needed to come to terms with his old identity after the events of the wall. Claire not only grow up as a person but also we saw small glimpses of an evolution within her power too (she left aside her whinny attitude to fight back, that's why I love her)
Overall I enjoyed this story, had me tearing up at some moments, laughing my ass off, biting my nails with a well placed cliffhanger and smiling through a cute moment.
Again thank you and I'll love to keep reading your stuff.
| Purple Lex chapter 31 . 12/26/2012
I'm gonna keep this review short and sweet 'cause I want to go read the beginning of your next one!
The fight scene was amazing - I was so thrilled to see Peter was not only back but also that he was the one to finally drive the knife through Hitler's chest and then put him in the tomb. That was so satisfying!
It's nice to see everyone together and well in the epilogue. Tracy and Noah are so cute, you've really make me fall in love with them! Angela of course lived up to her semi-manipulative (I'll only say 'semi' because it's done in good jest and not for bad-for-sake-of-good intentions) persona with basically setting Peter up - wonderful! Gabriel becoming a fixture in their hero unit was really comforting, I'm glad that after all that he fits in without really a second thought; the only second thought was the "Claire, make him stop" moment and that was just funny!
Molly's "Twins!" comment has me incredibly intrigued! Are they being born right then or in the future? Ah, you have me so excited!
Great story. Really, just... great. :D
| julyisfree chapter 30 . 12/14/2012
OMG THIS CHAPTER!
The change of POV's I'm a big fan of multiple PoV's but sometimes it's get a little tricky, is difficult to explain the same event from different eyes without failing and becoming somewhat redundant, but I feel that you have accomplished with this flawlessly and this chapter is proof to that. You added various precious points in the narrative without developing the plot line so much; it was a nice in-between chapter.
I greatly enjoyed Claire's explanation to joining the cheerleading squad, is like she always felt this disconnection to the world thus moving her to be part of something and in a way it was also a call for attention to Noah.
The mention of Mr. Muggles: Brilliant. Nice change of pace from all the angst.
Noah: he really is the man with a plan, always thinking beforehand.
Tracy: YaY she is alive! I'm so rooting for her.
Little Noah: my heart was melting for his attachment with Claire. They're so cute together.
Gabriel: That's him even when the last fiber of his being he'll try to do the impossible, I was so scared for him.
And finally the cliffhanger of all cliffhangers: PETER FUCKING PETRELLI IS BACK!
I swear I screamed: HELL YEAH KICK HIS ASS PETE!
This story is killing me, please update soon!
| Purple Lex chapter 30 . 12/12/2012
"that key will open a safety deposit box, in the New York City Central Bank. It is stored under the name of Mister Muggles." - Bahahahh!
That was the only moment I laughed though 'cause DRAMA'S EVERYWHERE.
So much angst! YAAAAAAY Peter's back! I knew it, I knew it! *does a little happy dance* I can't wait - now regain your consciousness Gabriel and heal so you'll know your friend isn't dead and you both can beat the crap out of Hitler (preferably killing him for good this time!)
I couldn't help thinking, reading Claire and Noah's regret-ridden thoughts, that they both need a vacation. And Tracy does. And Molly - that girl has seen some serious stuff that a girl her age shouldn't. I hope our heroes win soon! They deserve it :-)