Reviews for Stormseeker: Borrowed Destiny |
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![]() ![]() Pathetic why the heck didn’t you arrange for someone to inform you beforehand or have your sleeping time arranged to give yourself more time?! |
![]() ![]() Also why the heck would you do something as pathetic as reveal your best ability and weakness to random people?! |
![]() ![]() Why the heck would he need to know the truth instead of just telling him that he needs to learn it for defense against the dark wizard?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mc starts at decent intelligence then takes a nosedive into retard zone up to chapter 10 where i gave up. Die seven times before going to the teacher than knows your secret and you can trust. Ive got better things to do than let mc actions kill my neurons |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sigh hogwarts is so competent as is dumbledore |
![]() ![]() ![]() I gotta say it's really hard reading a child MC, always. Just makes you scream at them for being stupid, naive etc when it's just them being young and ignorant. |
![]() ![]() If you can do the "accent" fine. If not it is just easier to read. And I was born in America, learned english growing up, I think it is an insane language! No need to make things harder trying to do "accents". Yes I am mono-lingual, the mess called english was difficult enough, no need for a second insanity. |
![]() ![]() Harry killed by the Dursleys, it should have happened in canon. There is an interesting crossover, THE BOY WHO FELL. It is HP/Star Wars and if its not on here then check Twisting The Hellmouth. TTH is a Buffy crossover site. |
![]() ![]() hot garbage. |
![]() ![]() I would have helped Rispy right up he stabbed be in they eye. Then I probably would just have killed the little shit. |
![]() ![]() With Hermione dead, it is lucky your Harry isn't actually Harry, considering how often he needed her to save him or do all the hard work. |
![]() ![]() So, Harry Potter if dead? An outsider on the run assumes his identity and place? I assume Voldemort and his lackeys will show their ugly, black-hearted selves sooner or later. When Sirius comes into the picture, will he be told the truth, or not? My you have left me with so many questions... Good job |
![]() ![]() Te whole ripsy thing comes completely out of no where and makes no sense especially if you've read canon Harry potter |
![]() ![]() You gave up harrys invisibility cloak what kind of idiot are you |
![]() ![]() ![]() There were so many times where Lexxen was so, so , so stupid. But the times he was awesome made up for it. So I just told myself "He's just a kid." repetedly whenever it became too much fo me. Like him blindly trusting the diary two freaking times... Overall this story is awesome, though I liked the Lexxen as Revan one better. Imma keep reading this series now, bye! |