Reviews for The Snake Within
AtramNoctem chapter 1 . 9/2
This is so bad. The writing is unimaginitive, the plot isn't appealing (who the fuck wants to hang around with Augusta "shrill bitch who failed her Charms O.W.L" Longbottom of all people?) and Harry just sounds whiny and pathetic instead of angry and motivated. I've skimmed over the next chapters and it's just as bad. Can't read this cringe.
NulledVoid chapter 26 . 7/25
Incantations7 chapter 26 . 7/8
I absolutely loved what you wrote in chapter 14, and for that chapter alone I recommend this story!
patofigueroa120 chapter 26 . 6/25
Esto fue hermoso
Cipher301 chapter 10 . 6/11
Lmfao Voldy a real one fr fr XD
Epeefencer chapter 10 . 6/11
Do you actually proof read what you publish? There are a ton of grammatical errors, missing and misused words. Plus words used where they aren't needed. It's a shame really as it detracts from the story.
Epeefencer chapter 5 . 6/11
According to HPWIKI the exchange rate is 1Galleon is equal to 5. Please do a little research.
Cipher301 chapter 2 . 6/10
I love when Hermione acts like a fucking person. Thank you for not turning her into a stereotypical sheep that follows Ron’s idiocy like a distressed puppy.
pix25 chapter 26 . 6/7
HeartsGlow chapter 25 . 6/3
so, Harry's horcrux will just disappear, or could it take over him someday?
HeartsGlow chapter 20 . 6/3
why aren't they looking in the RoR for the Tiara? Why the problem with how to destroy the Horcruxes? Harry knows that all he needs are basilisk fangs to destroy what he finds.
HeartsGlow chapter 10 . 6/2
why doesn't the ministry sue Fudge for misappropriation of funds? Good thing that Hermione and her parents are away for a month. Hoping Susan was at Hannah's, or popped away by an elf
HeartsGlow chapter 6 . 6/1
Why is Harry calling the portrait Charlus, instead of Grandfather? He IS Harry's grandfather
LongLiveTheKing32 chapter 26 . 5/17
So it took me a few days, but I read all of this story. It's good :)

Good job.
jurmaev chapter 26 . 3/17
Great story! I really shows Harrys growth as a character.
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