Reviews for The Snake Within |
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Guest chapter 8 . 9/24 I am not a fan of this chapter for many reasons, but Daphne screaming at Harry for grieving "because something didn't go as [he] wanted" mere HOURS after he gets find out that Sirius is dead is just really fucking callous. Something didn't go as he wanted? He just found out his godfather DIED, for goodness sake. I thought Ron was supposed to be the one with the emotional range of a teaspoon. I get that Harry needs to go see the goblins as soon as possible, but Daphne can fuck right off for the way she was talking to him. |
Tony Moonstone chapter 26 . 9/21 That has to be one of the best Harry/Daphne stories that I've ever had the pleasure of reading. I love everything that you did and made Neville a strong character in the story. I also like how powerful and strong you made Harry. The way you ended Voldemort was something I've never seen any author do before. You surprised me with chapter, though the biggest was how you ended Snapes life, very anticlimactic. I'm so going to share this story to my friends. Take care and be well! |
Tony Moonstone chapter 10 . 9/20 Harry blackmailing Bones, Harry tells Dumbledore he isn't stupid and knows the Prophecy and my favourite moment is when Dudley slams the door on Voldemorts face stunning him shocked. So far the best chapter. Onward I read. Take care and be well! |
Tony Moonstone chapter 3 . 9/20 So far the story is quite good and a little refreshing. I admit I haven't read many Harry/Daphne pairings, so I wonder in which direction the story will go. Onward I read. Take care and be well! |
Galloway chapter 8 . 9/2 Every time I reread this story I get to this point and remember, “Oh yeah, this is the one that saves Sirius from the Ministry only to immediately kill him in the most unnecessary and unrealistic fashion possible. No wonder I always forget.” Heck, I even forgot I already commented on this very point, but it bugs me so much I have to comment again. Did Sirius forget how to apparate? Did he forget the house has a floo? Because nothing in the description says that Voldy shut down either of those. I’m not even sure there is a point to killing Sirius in this story that couldn’t have been achieved in a different way that didn’t punch your readers in the throat. Oh well, time to promptly forget again that you did it. |
Pat chapter 26 . 8/27 A most excellent story! |
Voldemort-In-DBD-When chapter 26 . 8/11 I LOVED THIS BOOK SM! TY FOR WRITING SUCH AN AMAZING BOOK |
inflation chapter 10 . 8/2 you do realize that if harry puts 15 MILLION DOLLARS TO THE GOVERNMENT, it would cause inflation SO SEVERE that a roll of bread would probably cause at least 250K DOLLARS RIGHT? THAT MUCH MONEY WOULD BECOME USELESS. |
csheila chapter 26 . 5/29 Great story |
csheila chapter 25 . 5/29 Lclever and originL |
csheila chapter 23 . 5/29 Hopefully the school is not trashed |
csheila chapter 22 . 5/29 Great twist |
csheila chapter 21 . 5/29 Well done with the sisters. Not to mention Harry and Daphne |
csheila chapter 20 . 5/29 Nice when your characters are not idiots. If only Canon worked the same way |
csheila chapter 19 . 5/29 Nice comedown |