This is so bad. The writing is unimaginitive, the plot isn't appealing (who the fuck wants to hang around with Augusta "shrill bitch who failed her Charms O.W.L" Longbottom of all people?) and Harry just sounds whiny and pathetic instead of angry and motivated. I've skimmed over the next chapters and it's just as bad. Can't read this cringe.

good

I absolutely loved what you wrote in chapter 14, and for that chapter alone I recommend this story!

Esto fue hermoso

Lmfao Voldy a real one fr fr XD

Do you actually proof read what you publish? There are a ton of grammatical errors, missing and misused words. Plus words used where they aren't needed. It's a shame really as it detracts from the story.

According to HPWIKI the exchange rate is 1Galleon is equal to 5. Please do a little research.

I love when Hermione acts like a fucking person. Thank you for not turning her into a stereotypical sheep that follows Ron’s idiocy like a distressed puppy.

Beautiful

so, Harry's horcrux will just disappear, or could it take over him someday?

why aren't they looking in the RoR for the Tiara? Why the problem with how to destroy the Horcruxes? Harry knows that all he needs are basilisk fangs to destroy what he finds.

why doesn't the ministry sue Fudge for misappropriation of funds? Good thing that Hermione and her parents are away for a month. Hoping Susan was at Hannah's, or popped away by an elf

Why is Harry calling the portrait Charlus, instead of Grandfather? He IS Harry's grandfather

So it took me a few days, but I read all of this story. It's good :)

Good job.

Great story! I really shows Harrys growth as a character.