Reviews for Lives
OriksGaming chapter 1 . 8/11/2015
Interesting, but empty. Reading about them finally getting together in another life, a short human one, makes it seem much less than what they could have had if they had lived their entire immortal lives together, rather than a short mortal one, where they're incapable of bearing children even.
GaaraSandNiN chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
Im glad they ended up together. I loved this so much.
musicallybrunet chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
That... was amazingly touching. I liked how you changed how they couldn't be together the last six times, and how it wasn't all happiness the last time. It made it feel real, like it would actually happen.
Your writing style is great; I really like it. Being a oneshot is a plus, too. (I adore oneshots.)
Keep writing!
S.A.Ness chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
beautifully written. It almost made me cry but i enjoyed it very much.
hijinklum chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
I love the whole "X times they didn't, Y that the did" idea with fanfiction. The idea that the two of them have followed each other through time to find their happy ending is just... I don't have the word for it. Heartwarming? I think that's close enough to get my point across.

This is a wonderful story, I love your writing style. I'm sure I'll read this many times over.
OnceAlways chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
I've just read your Inheritance Cycle stories, and I must say, I really liked them! Especially this fic. Although there were a few errors, nothing's really perfect, and this was very well written, anyway!

My favourite is the one of the wedding, because I somehow felt that one the most.
Canolli chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
That was beautiful and sad at the same time.