Reviews for Go All The Way With Me
Some dude chapter 9 . 8/14
HOLY CRAP! 10/10 i got a boner for 5 mins after reading this XD
camtheman4565 chapter 9 . 6/25
That was suprisingly good story, I was not expecting much from it at first... it turned out to be a very good story.
So great I chapter 9 . 6/24
I was looking stories like this and can you make a other as part 2 and what happens in that story is bubblegum get jealous and want to have sex with Finn too
Guest chapter 9 . 6/4
Amazing. Simply amazing work
monica chapter 9 . 12/27/2015
Omg it was like love store
Guest chapter 9 . 12/25/2015
Funny what u did with the fin thing
diegonaranjo73942 chapter 9 . 11/5/2015
that shit got me horny dam that story is also good
Guest chapter 9 . 10/4/2015
I've read many fanfiction novels before but this is my favorite. I enjoyed it and i plan to read more
Guest chapter 2 . 9/12/2015
Dude you blew it. If you want to write an erotic story. You must build up the suspense. You got to play on finns vulnerability. Pb should open finns trousers, and slowly start jerking his limp cock. As he slowly gets an erection, he should display his uncomfortableness, he enjoys it but doesn't feel ready. There should be a lot of awkwardness and emotion. Finn should both not want sex, yet want it, and pb should slowly win him over, placing his hand on her breasts, her hand down his pants. It should be natural. Finns a virgin, not a porn star.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/19/2015
Seaweeds thats so cute but pb is an asshole and a slut
Mr.PaulGray chapter 9 . 8/7/2015
Guest chapter 9 . 7/19/2015
Man I really liked your story it was intense and great the story line was understandable and the story was interesting and arousing at the same time I hope you will write another story like this or continue this one amazing job! Well done;)
Guest chapter 9 . 6/25/2015
finn chapter 9 . 6/23/2015
uh yeau dat feelt suh gud m9
Batman chapter 9 . 6/20/2015
this was surprisingly well made! I thought it would have been bad I am mistaken!
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