Reviews for The Final Predicted Outcome
eilonwya10 chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
This makes so much sense. It's really not clear in the books why or how Officials think Matching works, and your tension between "it's all biology" and "something more that changes fundamental motivations" brings reason to why Cassia's always on about the Matching Officials not understanding love, when clearly most Matched couples do love each other.

I also appreciate how the Official's been given a name, a personality, and coherent motivations, as well as the growing detail on how Officials do their work.
T3RRY B3RRY chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
I don't like her. But if it wasn't for her Ky and Cassia would have never met!
misskikimarie chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Awesome! I loved this sooo much! :3
scorchedtrees chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
A good perspective of the Official - you captured her well!
Pallas Athene chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
First of all, i am the first reviewer YAY! second of all, I loved your story and how well the descriptions of things turnrd out. If I was the official this is probably the format of the experiment data i would have chosen Keep writing :-)