Reviews for Free Pass
d1x1lady chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Great back-and-forth. Shawn DOES get way too much special treatment by O'Hara...and the chief...and everybody really. Glad Lassiter called her out.
Kathryn Claire O'Connor chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
My sides hurt, I laughed so hard! Awesome job on this, I love it!:)
Trekkieb chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Aw, I loved this! Lassiter brought up some very valid points. Loved the "He's thirty freaking six!" Everyone was very in-character, and I could totally picture this as part of an episode.
Hummingbird2 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
I love it, thank you!
spookysister7 chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
cute and so true!
IamStoopKid chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Haha that was funny(: but I'm pretty sure Shawn's 33... And I don't think he smells like cheese! But it is kind of true about the leeway she gives them... But

It also seems like lassie always goes for the low blow when he makes fun of Shawn, like he's trying to be mean instead of just bug him. But that also seems to be just how he comes of.
the-omnomnom-phenomenon chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
The tapeworm joke was hilarious!
hfce chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Good story but too bad she rather date a child over a man. :)
Lawson227 chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Spot freakin' ON. He is an ass, but he's well aware of it and he's the adult and she's well aware of it, but I can't blame him for being tired of being the whipping boy.

Go Carlton, calling Juliet on her double standard and go Juliet for having a reason for it.

Verra nice.

I won't even nudge you, even though...

Okay. No. I said I wouldn't nudge.

I'll stop now and go back to writing CH15.