Reviews for The Last Choice
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
oooooooooh
nombiecraftz chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Absolutely stunning. Completely believable and well done. Thank you!
Lady Arachne chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Awesome! Loved how this started and loved how it ended! :DD
Helen chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
This is beautiful story. It made me cry and feel very sad for Voldemort.
Stellanti Nocte chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
I'm starting to like not getting a sequel because the open-endedness lets me play with it in my mind however I want. I can have the stupid, mushy happy ending that I love! Lol, I'm obsessed with this pairing too! I liked the tone of the story. Harry's serene thoughts about death fit him well and I liked that little tidbit where Harry states that he was a fantasy novelist. I also liked Voldemort's character and how you portrayed that he was beginning to feel remorse. Great story! ;)

Starry Night
Cian Keita chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
This was so nice, I just had to comment on this.
Barranca chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Aww, it has been a century and a half, and Voldemort has waited alone for all that time, unable to heal. This is a sad thought. Looks like Harry has high hopes for him :)
ShiRaToRiMaRu chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
That was so beautiful and wistful. I loved the kissing scene! Poor Tom, hopefully he doesn't have to wait another century before being able to step on the train. A very nice oneshot.
Loveliest Wraith chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Aww, this is so sad and sweet. Good job and good luck with the contest!
xXxMartelxXx chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
asdkghsk I have to stop hitting "submit" before I get all my thoughts out.

Anyway, if I get strict, the kiss _does_ seem a little out of nowhere, since a kiss in the cheek or in the forehead or even a hug could have gotten the point of platonic love, compassion and forgiveness across without the connotations of romantic love that a kiss in the mouth implies.

As a fan of the pairing, I can very much overlook that (;D), but it really does take points away from the story if you look at it with more seriousness and a more rigorous eye.
xXxMartelxXx chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Wait, this deserves a more proper review. :P

Only the small grammatical mistakes here and there (mostly verbs in the wrong tense) and the feeling that there is a little structure missing at the ending (at least, compared to the rest of the story) keeps it from being perfect. Very well done.
Martel chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Very fitting, my inner slash fan says. :D
Lemrinth chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
This story is really good. I really got sad at the last part. I hope Tom sees him again.
the lola chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
This was...intriguing. I have never ever read this pairing, and I find it a little strange. But nevertheless, you made it work. It was very sad, and the emotions very raw. You did make a few grammar mistakes in dialogue, but nothing major. Overall, I liked the way you handled this, good job!