Reviews for The Last Choice |
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![]() ![]() This is lovely. Just lovely, after I read it I felt completely content. Thank you for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oooooooooh |
![]() ![]() Absolutely stunning. Completely believable and well done. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Loved how this started and loved how it ended! :DD |
![]() ![]() This is beautiful story. It made me cry and feel very sad for Voldemort. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm starting to like not getting a sequel because the open-endedness lets me play with it in my mind however I want. I can have the stupid, mushy happy ending that I love! Lol, I'm obsessed with this pairing too! I liked the tone of the story. Harry's serene thoughts about death fit him well and I liked that little tidbit where Harry states that he was a fantasy novelist. I also liked Voldemort's character and how you portrayed that he was beginning to feel remorse. Great story! ;) Starry Night~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so nice, I just had to comment on this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, it has been a century and a half, and Voldemort has waited alone for all that time, unable to heal. This is a sad thought. Looks like Harry has high hopes for him :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so beautiful and wistful. I loved the kissing scene! Poor Tom, hopefully he doesn't have to wait another century before being able to step on the train. A very nice oneshot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, this is so sad and sweet. Good job and good luck with the contest! |
![]() ![]() asdkghsk I have to stop hitting "submit" before I get all my thoughts out. Anyway, if I get strict, the kiss _does_ seem a little out of nowhere, since a kiss in the cheek or in the forehead or even a hug could have gotten the point of platonic love, compassion and forgiveness across without the connotations of romantic love that a kiss in the mouth implies. As a fan of the pairing, I can very much overlook that (;D), but it really does take points away from the story if you look at it with more seriousness and a more rigorous eye. |
![]() ![]() Wait, this deserves a more proper review. :P Only the small grammatical mistakes here and there (mostly verbs in the wrong tense) and the feeling that there is a little structure missing at the ending (at least, compared to the rest of the story) keeps it from being perfect. Very well done. |
![]() ![]() Very fitting, my inner slash fan says. :D |
![]() ![]() This story is really good. I really got sad at the last part. I hope Tom sees him again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was...intriguing. I have never ever read this pairing, and I find it a little strange. But nevertheless, you made it work. It was very sad, and the emotions very raw. You did make a few grammar mistakes in dialogue, but nothing major. Overall, I liked the way you handled this, good job! |