Reviews for When Nothing Remains
mapleleavesandshit chapter 5 . 8/27/2013
mapleleavesandshit chapter 4 . 8/27/2013
OhMyLeppy chapter 5 . 7/17/2013

I need to go cry now. Why must you hurt me this way?

Time to go read your other stories, you cruel person who is heartless to me feels!

This story was amazing, and I'm still crying!
OhMyLeppy chapter 3 . 7/17/2013
I still love this story! I feel so bad for little Feli!
QueenOfThePride chapter 5 . 6/22/2013
This story was amazing. one of the best ive read in a while. I really loved how in the last chapter you had the original thoughts (in italics) and the newer/now thoughts compared together. I think it really helped wrapped up the story and it was a wonderful transition.
Ischemia chapter 5 . 3/20/2013
I adore this story. You write very well, and I certainly enjoyed the progress of their relationship. The plot did move quite a bit between chapters 4 and 5, and I'd love to read more chapters of this story if you ever wanted to continue with this. Either way, thank you for writing.
Brambleface chapter 5 . 12/16/2012
Perfect ending. Not leaving us hanging in my opinion. It was both happy and sad at the same time.
Pippin-The-Hobbit chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
Wow, I read the companion one-shot first and I must say this was amazing too.

I love the hanging ending here and all those things that went unsaid. They allow us to fill in the details ourselves, the way the italicised thoughts of Mattie when first captured segue into the thoughts of him now, years later.

Definately made an impact!
Pokekid543 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I'm crying my head off! *cries a river*
Of Ella and Oranges chapter 5 . 7/16/2012
Hmm. I honestly don't know what I feel about this. The writing was excellent, obviously. Perhaps it's because I felt everything? This reminds me of how all colors mixed together make white. I probably don't make any sense right now. As if I ever make sense. This... story, I suppose, definitely elicited thought. Lots and lots of thought. Speaking of thoughts, I just lost my train of thought. Why is it a train, anyways? Mine will now be a plane of thought. Or perhaps a space shuttle. Because those are usually much more awesome. How is this a review? It's more of a brain-dump. Oddly enough, I think I now have an adrenaline rush. The story must have caused it, as I am currently laying on my bed in the middle of the night holding an iTouch, and haven't consumed any caffiene for a few days. I usually don't get adrenaline rushes from reading. Or do I? I haven't given it much thought before now... I should look for that in the future. This is getting very long and off-topic, if I ever had a topic. What's the point of this review, anyways? Perhaps it will provide someone with slight entertainment for the few seconds it takes to read? I suppose I'll just end it now.
StrykerTheDemon chapter 5 . 6/16/2012
The story is very good, I was drawn in reading the chapters. Though I felt it ended rather quickly before it had a chance to delve into interesting situations.
Sigart chapter 5 . 6/3/2012
Lovely. I love the mystery of this last chapter, and I think it works well that the reader has to work out the time skip for themselves. Not only that but also whatever happened during hat time skip, because as it is, it could be anything and imagining it is glorious :D I liked how it ended so openly, too. I mean, sure, I would like closure, but sometimes, closure is just not what the fic needs, yeah? You can't always get all the answers :)
Kaaki Shaman chapter 5 . 6/2/2012
WHA-! That's such a cliffhanger! I honestly do love this chapter, but it just sort of leaves it there! I mean, a sequel or continuation or even just an epilogue-type thing would be nice. *shrug*
Valkyrie99 chapter 5 . 6/2/2012
... I'm a little confused. But I guess I get it, no offense but the ending was a little rushed, you should have explained it was a time skip earlier on. Anyway this story was AWESOME! 3
Nekoyaz chapter 4 . 5/28/2012
I love this. I've been hooked since the beginning. Please write more.
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