shikaku is not anbu commander he is the jonin commander, a bigggg difference

also where is the thing when naruto thinks the villagers are two faced bitches that change their thoughts on naruto just like that and naruto actually fucking thinks about that and not be just a fucking moron for a change. i get it fhat he has his dad back but seriously man have him be a little introspective like his canon self sometimes is. he just forgets everything so quickly but in canon there is still some doubt about all the things that have happened to naruto there.

that tajuu was some 12 year old naruto shit dude just bumrushing god that kinsa sucks!
also the dragon takes fucking 44 seals to do for zabuza to do and like 1 or 2 or 3 for the nidaime and their affinity was for water and here minato does that insanely fast when it isn't even his affinity so what is up with that bro? huh!

also you said that another rasenshuriken when he used a rasengan before so internal logic much

also the rasenshuriken fuckin cuts the body at a minsicule level that would render the enemy unable to use chakra as it cuts cells you dipshit and here you are just having naruto using the rasenshuriken willy nilly.

Is Fourth Hokage not Dourth Hokage

Has this work been abandoned? The writing and story flow has been done beautifully. I even like those father/son moments of disagreeing lol. I look foreward to seeing more positive father/son time and maybe more bonding time with Kakashi with the other two.

what the heck is the "un" dude. it's hella confusing and mood damper

So this is the sixth time I read through this story and it is very good. I see it updated in the date given and it saddens me. I hope you will finish it one day. It will remain in my favorites and I hope I can see Tsunade interact with Minato eventually.

So naruto is still a fag?

You spelled Sensei wrong

heh good job keeping the vibe of the original show, been a while since I saw it done in a fic

Turn from sin and turn to God
Thank The Lord Jesus Christ we can be forgiven
Have a good day

But I enjoyed the story, so thank you for writing this!

Next chapter will be on Tenth of February? Cap.

This is amazing please continue

nextttttttt thor