|Reviews for The Quarian's Request|
| ILLINOIS chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
| LivingLow chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Even though this was fluff, and even though it stuck pretty close to canon, it would've been decent fluff if it hadn't been for that ending, IMO.
Why would Miranda be right outside Shep's cabin? What terminal? The one that projects EDI is right inside, not outside, Shep's cabin, and there isn't one in the elevator. Then you go an make their moaning so incredibly loud, it couldn't be contained by a sound proof room? So I guess we're throwing reason out the window. And last you make Miranda out into some gossiping school girl with no ability to contain her emotions? That's about as OOC as you can get with her.
I get that maybe some of that was for comic effect. But unless you're doing a parody, you shouldn't have to resort to going OOC to get it.