Reviews for The party of Slumber
Biniani chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Can you do Argent/Hotspot?
Starfire072302 chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
ARGENT AND SPEEDY?! now THAT was compleatly random! ARGENT BELONGS WITH HOTSPOT!
Starfire072302 chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
uhh i thought in the earlier story you said ROBIN AND STARFIRE WERE GIRLFRIEND AND BOYFRIEND!
Guest chapter 3 . 1/6/2013
"Cyborg looked like he had pooped his pants"
i think i almost died of laughter when i read this
Raju chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
hello all pepole in this.
Vi-Violence chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Please try to improve your diction.
Shadow's Kitty chapter 3 . 3/8/2012
omg omg omg, pllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzz write the tofu! meat! tofu! meat! chapter!
Shadow's Kitty chapter 2 . 3/8/2012
OMG! that is the awsumest funnyest story i have read in a loooonngg time! great job!
The Cretin chapter 3 . 3/5/2012
Well this was a cute pickme upper:) Well, you definitely have a flare for fluff and there can never be enough fluff in romance. I recommend RhetttheBrattPrince's works. Parker is a good writer of fluff but its mostly BBRae. Still, Rhett's a good writer and I think you could learn some tricks. Now hun, we are going to have to work on that grammar. Always capitalize names and use correct punctuation. I'm sure you'll pick it up. Also, ya might want to try spacing out your sentences and paragraphs. Personally, it don't bother me but alot of readers prefer that format. It sometimes makes it easier to read...but hey, don't worry. I'm sure you'll do just fine. May you have a long career, an enjoyable stay, and loads of fun. Glad if I could be of help. Hope to read more from you someday. Keep rockin
hi chapter 3 . 3/5/2012
I love the plot, but grammar and punctuation... I don't love.

For example:

"Look jinx I have been thinking a lot and I came to a conclusion that I... I really think your special and that I have been thinking of you non-stop since the day I met you, remember how I would tease you and mess with you about being a villain? That's because I knew that you weren't a bad person you were just confused, so yeah I really like you."

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BrookeAlex0128 chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
ok so thanks for the tips the confidence risers and the ideas guys. :) ill check out some of your stories too.
The Cretin chapter 2 . 3/4/2012
Read both chaps. Not bad. Never figured Raven and Jinx would go for the slumber party types...but hey, this is fanfic. Its all about having fun so if it works for your story go with it. I hope to read more. I'm a fan of the comics so if you want to ask me anything go right ahead if you think it will help. I gotta wonder who Argent likes. In the comics she liked a boy named Molecule but sadly he got killed. She also kinda liked Speedy. A writer once said she thought he was the "cutest single dad" in DC. Anyways, good luck. Don't listen to flamers. If someone flames you just take it in stride. They don't really know anything anyway. Best wishes. Keep rockin
YJ-Lover chapter 2 . 3/4/2012
Liked it :D please continue!
PetrichorGirl13 chapter 2 . 3/4/2012
The story title sounds just like mine(My Party of Slumber) that's the main reason I read it however it's nothing like mine ,you did good
Shadow's Kitty chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
oooo plz continue soon, i wana see how this turns out... great story so far! S.k.