|Reviews for Horizontally Challenged|
| mavk4444 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Aww, I loved this. I could totally see this happening, and I thought you did a great job :)
| Boots'N'Opals chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Yeah, seriously, how does this not have more reviews? It's so awesome and sweet! I can't think of any critiques really... it's good, I don't know what you're talking about, haha. :)
Ugh, what jerks.
I love James' insecurity in the locker room. I mean it was horrible of course, but you wrote it really well, and I could really tell what he was feeling.
And the part with James' mom made me laugh. :)
Well, I thought the end was sweet. :) Really, I loved it. :) Good job. I'm trying to think of a suggestion, but I'm drawing a blank here! I appreciate it when authors are eager for critique though, it tells so much about them as a writer who wants to get even better. So thank you! :)
| forgetthemoon-ignorethesky chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
How can this not have more reviews? Ahh, it's perfect. :')
| ShyVibrant chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
So sweet :)