|Reviews for Guardian of the Earth|
| Silverblaze16 chapter 2 . 10/6
This story has a lot of potential. Keep going!
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/30
This is great and is there going to be any perzoe because I really like them as a pair
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4
Hi this is good so far but who is she
| DemiqodDauqhter chapter 11 . 6/9
Zak is just all the cloaked guy is better than Percy Jackson and we're all just cracking up. :) it's nice to have a little humor in these kind of stories. I usually get bored when they don't have any humor whatsoever, only serious shit.
| Defective Wolf chapter 9 . 5/18
in the books the hespirides' mother is pleoine, you may already know that but its a bit odd that you chose nyx. changing this detail also means that the origins of riptide make no sense, after all it was a gift from zoes mother when she faded, being of the sea (sea nymph) and riptide being of the sea, not the night
| DaughterofHadesBloodofPylos chapter 22 . 1/31
Please update this story!
| the-exiled-realm chapter 17 . 1/2
You make some great but i have to be honest and I don't want to be rude if I am please tell me off. Anyway it seems this chapter was really rough like you didn't go over it to smooth it out like a rough draft is the correct way to describe it I hope u later go over it
| Guest chapter 21 . 10/25/2015
You are doing a good job , just keep up wth it . More details in the chapters would be appreciate. Make sure you proofread before you publish the chapters . One last thing updates please soon
| syafiqko9 chapter 10 . 8/7/2015
Does Zoe have a thing for having objects through her stomach
| guest chapter 8 . 6/12/2015
Isn't it 2000 years instead of 200 years?
| bigmike589 chapter 4 . 4/20/2015
ive got a story you might like its called the sins of her its an artemis story the idea came to me fro mthe new fast and furious film
| Ceifeiro chapter 9 . 4/8/2015
You have the gods talking in speech that everyday people use, but they would be more likely to use man instead of guy, and other things like that. When you're having a god talk, you should probably have it be a little more formal.
| Ceifeiro chapter 2 . 4/8/2015
This is one of the first - if not THE first - to have a realistic as possible Percy running away from camp because of his brother. Most of the time, he's too whiny and ooc to run away, but this is about as close as I can imagine being written as "All of Percy's friends, Annabeth, and Poesidon leave Percy for his newly found half-brother, making him run away from camp". I realize you will probably never see this, but, on the off chance you do, I want you to know how much I appreciate your writing this book. From the bottom of my heart, I thank you for bringing a well-written story to this plot-base.
| Alex chapter 5 . 4/2/2015
Baseball is actually very physically demanding.
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/14/2015
That baseball statement makes sense
And sometimes I think people actually
only play it for money because they are
Mentally challenged or something
JK but still, It's kinda boring