|Reviews for Daughter of the Wind|
| BlossomStorm chapter 2 . 6/7/2012
You know, I'm not a huge fan of OCs, 'cause they often change the original storyline too much, but I like this sort of AU thing you've got going here. Lavitz being alive makes me giggle with glee! The animal/dragoons were hard to stomach at first (I read the original version too!) but that's just because I'm so in love with the human ones ...
Anyway, though, your characters stand WONDERFULLY on their own. I think a story regarding the Northlanders doesn't have to relate to Endiness at all! I think you could publish that for real and it'd become some crazy-awesome fantasy reading material! Their backgrounds and the history of the Northlands you produced are intriguing and believable.
Either way, I definitely think you should keep going!
| continue chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
your writing is very good. but i cant stomach original characters too well. bad experiences. they tend to suck up the story. you should continue regardless because it would be a waste for you to stop - you write very very well.
| continue chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
lavits is great and this prologue was very intriguing.