Reviews for The Caring for and Keeping of Secrets
StarkidHufflepuff chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
I love that. No seriously, I do. It's foggy, unclear, mysterious, and dark, like the Deathly Hallows should be. You did a really fantastic job of describing things, I just love it. I think te ending is Ron leaving her, taking away her last sliver of hope, and her secret is that she loves him, maybe? Too bad I'm an anonymous reviewer and you can't PM me, or whatever if's called, to tell me if I'm right.
stochmika chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
My english are not good and yours seem perfect son at first it was like I was reading in a strange and foreign language but after a few attempts I managed to understand it.

Very deep toughts and a very sensitive issue, as being in love secretly, is. I think you voiced Hermione's thoughts perfectly and kudos for that XXXX
JustAnotherGuy100 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Yeah, keeping your feelings a secret is never a good thing. Loved your writing :)
Romione4ever chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Oh, I forgot. I saw your profile and you asked for prompts or challenges. In all the years I read fics about Ron/Hermione I haven't found yet a decent one-shot about that moment in DH where Harry saw Ron/Hermione sleeping and wonders if they slept holding hands. I would love to read what happened that night. What made them fall asleep like this. With your writing, I think it's going to be beautiful, no matter what you decide to write in this one-shot. I hope you'll go for it. If not, it's okay, you have a lot of R/Hr stories completed and I'm sure you're going to write more in the future :)
Scheherazade Bet chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Love the formal writing style in this, it feels like something that could have been written 100 years ago in a way. That's a good thing, appropriate to the genre, and very much in character for Hermione as well. This piece also has a mysterious quality that is very compelling, again to do with style, what is said and what isn't. This is not a criticism at all, in fact I think it's an asset, but in theory you could remove all HP refs in this and still have a really cool stand-alone work.
Romione4ever chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
I had to read it three times to understand what it was this fic about, but now I realise that it was about Ron leaving the tent and Hermione's secret was her feelings about him. Heartbreaking and angsty fic with beautiful emotions.

I'm impressed with your writing level. I wouldn't be suprised if you were a professional writer. It's simple that good! I hope we'll read more fics from you about the Good Ship in the future :)