Reviews for Apple Surprise
shadows being chapter 2 . 11/13/2013
NO . FINISH DE STORY!?
Pleaseeeeee.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
BTW i hate your stupid little se scenes
Guest chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
WHAT IS THIS SHIT! I'VE SEEN SPIKE GET SEDUCTED WAY TO MANY TOMES I FIND IT DISTURBING?!
I NEVER LIKED HIM BIENG SEDUCTED IN THE FIRST PLACE, AND NOW RAPE?!
YOURE A PERVERT.
Overall score3/10
anon chapter 2 . 7/14/2013
Yes
I feel like at the end spike will end up with both of them
Nova Lights Luna's assistant chapter 2 . 6/20/2013
yes, do continuethe story!
Izzi224 chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
CONTINUE DAMMIT! This was amazing!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/21/2013
This needs to continue
MR Nuke chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
How does someone or rather somepony comit rape, interspecies, adultery, and worse doing that to your best friend's kid brother/younger sibling's man in one night? The answer-she don't give a fuck! Well, technically she did...but ..UUURRRG! You get the point! But will she get away with it?
Roman Empire chapter 2 . 2/28/2013
Wow. The second chapter was... unexpected, to say the least. Since when does Applejack like Spike that much? Still, she was quite an unrelenting force there. I feel really bad for Apple Bloom, but I was mildly turned on throughout.
Walking in a Cornfield chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
This is for the question as to continue it or not in the next chapt, yes, yes you should continue it. I like this story.
Walking in a Cornfield chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
Well...that's was very unexpected!...wow...
Deathmatch1959 chapter 2 . 1/8/2013
Please continue this.
adamedutsen chapter 2 . 1/8/2013
I did not like that applejack raped spike
Guest chapter 2 . 12/27/2012
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAA AAAARRRRRRRR! NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW!
emochick22 chapter 2 . 12/8/2012
cool but needs to be longer! love it tho!
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