Reviews for Apple Surprise
Nova Lights Luna's assistant chapter 2 . 6/20/2013
yes, do continuethe story!
Izzi224 chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
CONTINUE DAMMIT! This was amazing!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/21/2013
This needs to continue
MR Nuke chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
How does someone or rather somepony comit rape, interspecies, adultery, and worse doing that to your best friend's kid brother/younger sibling's man in one night? The answer-she don't give a fuck! Well, technically she did...but ..UUURRRG! You get the point! But will she get away with it?
Roman Empire chapter 2 . 2/28/2013
Wow. The second chapter was... unexpected, to say the least. Since when does Applejack like Spike that much? Still, she was quite an unrelenting force there. I feel really bad for Apple Bloom, but I was mildly turned on throughout.
Walking in a Cornfield chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
This is for the question as to continue it or not in the next chapt, yes, yes you should continue it. I like this story.
Walking in a Cornfield chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
Well...that's was very unexpected!
Deathmatch1959 chapter 2 . 1/8/2013
Please continue this.
adamedutsen chapter 2 . 1/8/2013
I did not like that applejack raped spike
Guest chapter 2 . 12/27/2012
emochick22 chapter 2 . 12/8/2012
cool but needs to be longer! love it tho!
Wither and wane chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
its to creepy and... rapey for me.
chipmunkfanantic chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
I knew AB would strike out like that now that's the kind of rebel i like update soon
Guest chapter 2 . 10/8/2012
You should really continue this I'm sure it would be quite a funny story. :)
Dragon'z Wrath chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
Oh for the love of God... continue this damn story! Lol I wanna see applejack get in some serious trouble for this and apple bloom to finally have spike.
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