Reviews for Such Devoted Sisters
lll0 chapter 5 . 4/9/2013
This whole collection is gorgeous, Gamma! As you can probably tell from my previous reviews, I think you got both Bella and Narcissa's characters perfect. They're both twisted and in cannon and lovely in a way that most writers don't like/dare to write, and I love the way you showed their relationship. The ending is perfect (I'm using that word a lot :P). The "another of the myriad family secrets" makes me want to know about the other secrets (I'm hoping more 'cest) :3
lll0 chapter 4 . 4/9/2013
I like the change in this one, Bella's almost sweet, but still warped. The last line is perfect, it shows Narcissa's confusion and helplessness in just one line, and gives the whole thing a new layer.
lll0 chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
Stop being so perfect! Bella is incredible in this, you have her so in cannon it's a little scary. I love the lines, "Bellatrix purred in Narcissa's ear, her voice deceptively soft and tender, sharply juxtaposing the grip she had on her little sister. " and "Come on, sister, beg me…" because the way you keep referring to Narcissa as her sister makes the whole thing more twisted, and really, what else do we want from Black 'cest?
lll0 chapter 2 . 4/9/2013
Again, amazing. It's short, but you got the characters and their relationship across so well. The way you write Bella is perfect, I've read so many stories where they make her completely in love with Narcissa, and she becomes really sweet and kind in a way Bella never would. In this I don't think she's really in love at all, and if she is it's more of a twisted obsessive love. But I might be reading too much into it :3
lll0 chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
This is a lovely beginning. I really like that you got Bella being nice in her mean Bella way... if that makes sense :P The line, "when anyone except me says they love you… it's a lie." is really powerful and wonderful and /Bella/.
ProfessorSquirrell chapter 5 . 4/8/2012
These were all beautifully done and I love what you did with the prompts. I love how scary Bella is in all of these and the way Cissa submits and then falls for her. My favorite drabble was definitely Press. That last line is perfection. Loved it!
PhenioxGypsy chapter 5 . 4/8/2012
well im sad to see it end but i believe that you tied it up very well and thank you for finishing it not just leaving 'in-progress'
TheBitterAftertaste chapter 4 . 3/23/2012
Hmmmmmm? So does narcissa love Bellatrix or is she just afraid of her...I don't know what to make of this one, it's good! (As always) but I don't know what to grasp from it...

Love Charlotte xxxxxxx
TheBitterAftertaste chapter 3 . 3/23/2012

This was fabulous, amazing, yet again I can't give criticism to perfection :(

Love Charlotte xxxx


Love Charlotte again for the last one xxxxx
TheBitterAftertaste chapter 2 . 3/23/2012
Yet again what I said before

I know Cissa is a lot cleverer than Bella takes her for,

And of course she is, as she is the reason Bellatrix had actually died.
TheBitterAftertaste chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Bellatrix sort of poisons Narcissa in this,

I get why Cissa was so loyal and patient with her now...


Charlotte xxxxxx
PhenioxGypsy chapter 4 . 3/22/2012
thank you for updating i really like this story )
Zelda12343 chapter 3 . 3/21/2012
. Bellatrix in the last one was quite in character.
PhenioxGypsy chapter 3 . 3/17/2012
oh my gettin hot over there more please begging you
ProfessorSquirrell chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
You've got Bella so in character it's scary. And I love it. And Narcissa's response. "Please love me" so gorgeous. I'm loving this so far. Keep it up :)
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