Reviews for The Chronicles of Utopia, Volume II
karthik9 chapter 52 . 8/24/2014
It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.
Sharnorasian Empire chapter 52 . 8/14/2014
… An update so late in the day

*pokes it* Hmm it seems real *pinches self* OW… yep it must be real…

Wow garion it seems things are heating up here… They seriously need to reform the lines, I would have a few strategies in mind if I were the one commanding the light army and my biggest criticism is they overcommitted… granted they may not have had much voice, but a core of reserves is necessary in just such situations… aside from that I got a few special tricks waiting

Next Draconic Knight chapter is almost ready, Ashram vs Xapferey :), all I will say is perseverance vs resilience and ferocity :)
Sharnorasian Empire chapter 51 . 7/25/2014
Well one of your best chapters yet, a few minor mistakes but aside from that excellent… you do things very well :)… can't wait for the new one or Utopia III
Sharnorasian Empire chapter 50 . 7/13/2014
Hmm, the demons are not making this easy… who's the pair of eyes watching? Is it a demon or god?

More Garion

4:18 update in the morning… surprising… very surprising
karthik9 chapter 50 . 7/13/2014
It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.
WarmasterSamiel chapter 49 . 6/12/2014
Good chapter. The political landscape will be interesting after the war, there will certainly be a reckoning.

I'm a bit surprised at Darlana's reaction, intelligence agencies do this all the time. It's like people being surprised that the NSA etc. is spying.

Still, both Prometheus and Darlana is underestimating Davis. They seem to have forgotten what it means to be a machine. Everything he does and says is calculated. He checks their reactions and plan accordingly. For him, bending the knee is nothing.

I suspect that Davis is already planning for a war against Darlana in the future.
karthik9 chapter 49 . 6/11/2014
It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.
Sharnorasian Empire chapter 49 . 6/10/2014
Hehe love it, love it big time :), who is this darkened figure? Hehe poor Krypioth :) The pale are being a pain it seems… MORE please
Sharnorasian Empire chapter 48 . 5/28/2014
True a katana cannot usually block head on, but any weapons can parry with the right skill. You describe the katana style well, hehehe poor Davis… More please
WarmasterSamiel chapter 48 . 5/28/2014
Nations don't have friends, only interests.

Good chapter, looking forward to the next battle.
karthik9 chapter 48 . 5/27/2014
It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.
WarmasterSamiel chapter 47 . 5/14/2014
Well the angst was a little annoying, but I understand why it was needed. Still think you should remove the Mary-sue.

Davis should try to bring scanning devices and analyze the ships engines, it would certainly help with their own, future space-program.

He should leave a few terminators near it, all of them trying to hack it. It probably won't work, but they might get lucky.
karthik9 chapter 47 . 5/13/2014
It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.
Sharnorasian Empire chapter 47 . 5/13/2014
Hehehe He licked the hull, oh gods that was HILARIOUS, but understandable. Crostrike makes a good point on the mentioned universal topics :)… so true. I loved the training segment, and the bit with Davis… MORE MORE MORE I say
karthik9 chapter 46 . 4/30/2014
It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.
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