Reviews for Sports day
ryuhayabusa298 chapter 1 . 4/27/2016
chapter 1 great start can't wait to see the faces of Touma and Accelerator
ANONYMOUS chapter 21 . 8/6/2015
Come back to us this story is amazing too good to be forgotten
polarpwnage chapter 13 . 10/31/2014
Interesting how u kept the original nove's writing style, which is to say frustrating to make sense of but good plot and dialogue regardless
Agent Nine chapter 21 . 4/24/2014
Great fic, and very suspenseful. I really hope you update soon. Can't wait. :D
J. Gentleman chapter 19 . 3/4/2014
They are now Street Fighter characters! Why is there no fan art for this chapter at least? A few of the costume choices may seem somewhat random, but they all work for the greater comedic effect. IMO, Mikoto as Juri is the best; the most hilarious.
Crow667 chapter 11 . 1/19/2014
man i like your fic but the gramar is a bit...bad and it makes hard to properly read the awesome story. other than that keep up the good work
Guest chapter 4 . 12/21/2013
Kamijou is far from purehearted, lol, Also, Someone explicitly told Sugita that hos explaination of his power was wrong (ie it is not producing and destroying psychokinetic walls. Also, there's a much more obvios reason that IB can'tr negate his power. It's because, just like leylines and human souls, Gemstones and their powers are a natural part of the world and nature.
Thatguy chapter 21 . 9/30/2013
dude r u dead?
A Certain Unfortunate Guy chapter 20 . 7/4/2013
Ok... This is interesting. Reading about me is kind of strange, but I feel flattered. To actually see people writing about me makes me feel fortunate, hehe. Well, I do hope to see this story updated. Thanks for your hard work.
Sven Vollfield chapter 20 . 6/17/2013
THis is great!
Thetorii chapter 21 . 4/25/2013
Welp... Still waiting for an update... I'am waiting...
carlos13 chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Addikhabbo chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
The King of Anachronisms chapter 21 . 2/15/2013
Damn. I leave for a few months and this story Explodes into a 200k story. Good work
Archangel's Star chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
A great story. I haven't read past chapter one, but I can tell this is gunna be good.

However -
Your punctuation with speech needs a li-ittle work.

For example,

"Well if you want to be like that" she laughed while speaking telegraphically " We'll see whose the best in Tokiwadai tomorrow"
is wrong.
"Well, if you want to be like that," she laughed while speaking telepathically;- " We'll see who's the best in Tokiwadai tomorrow."
is correct.

I don't want to sound like an english lecturer, but it seems almost Wrong to have " We'll see whose the best in Tokiwadai tomorrow" end without a full stop (a period if you live in America.). It slows your writing down.

Keep going though. Your story is excellent, and this is your only problem.
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