|Reviews for Crimson Edward Outtake: Test|
| Diamonds and Bones chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Me how well you keep the personalities in
complete character with those SM gave to
us, but still have managed to write a story
with such very different undertones. The
sensuality of your stories is pervasively
palpable, and sweeps the reader (me) up
in it's lusty undercurrents, but has a subtle
flair of spirituality that keeps (me) buoyant.
I find that as my mind argues with Edward
about his views of scripture, and how very
flawed they are, a hope surges for him,
and for Bella as well.
It is funny, I have held MANY a deep
discussion/argument with my fellow
Christians with regards to the whole
Twilight series. So many want to dismiss
them as evil. I say that they can be viewed
in an entirely different light! To me, Carlisle
is a shining example of what a Christian ought
to be. He values life, honors God, and walks
up rightly, fighting against his "sin nature",
and choosing daily to do what is right, in
spite of what his flesh would demand.
Sorry, didn't mean to preach a sermon, but
based on some things I you wrote in Blue,
I have a feeling that we are of similar thought!
| courtneyh chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Different took me a while to catch on but really go
| edwards-girl-4-ever chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
This was very interesting.
| dazzleglo chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Wow this was excellent. I still haven't read through all the Texas comps yet, I've been so busy with other things. I loved that this gave some insight as to what might've happened when Carlisle was with Aro. LOVED IT!
| alextraviolet chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Thanks for the background. I do hope all is well with you and family.
| keyecullen chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Enjoyed reading about Carlisle's time in Volturi. Aro is a horrifying little troll isn't he? All the time spouting how he is Carlisle's "friend" and yet forcing him to watch him, rape, feed off of and kill that woman. Ugh. Interesting too that Carlisle was already studying the effects of venom in different states.
Can't wait to read what happens next.
| tracyluvstwilight2010 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Great outtake hun. Have a great Sunday.
| Jeni K chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
So Carlisle was testing this theory before he even came here. What made him stop? Did he even stop once he came to the New World? Aro is a very crafty person, but I am glad he was not able to tempt Carlisle. He would have suffered greatly if Aro succeded. I do not trust that Aro would let Carlisle go so easily, there has to be more to it.
| Camilla10 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
I suppose that this early research will be very important for the main story.
You confirm my idea of the Volturi and that there was debauchery in Volterra. Aro is supposed to have a mate, but has no qualms at having intercurse with a whore, bedore killing her. Therefore the mating bond experienced by traditional vampires is not as absolute (and wonderful) as the one experienced by "ethical" vamps like the Cullens.