Reviews for A Long Time Coming
mjaw chapter 1 . 11/27/2002
This is not sappy, no.

This is right on what I'd think he'd feel like. I mean, yeah.

Good. Good. Good. Just...good! ;)

Hehe, really? Loved it! Of course, what'd ya think after essay leaving and wowing my ass off and oho's and aha's? I'll state it again - YOU have what I would call...

T...A...L...E...N...T.

Period.

More to read, so scuse me.

;)

A.M.L.
Nez chapter 1 . 5/24/2002
Wow. That was GOOD. Not too much fluff, not too much angst. You blended the two aspects of their relationship flawlessly. This is definitely a beautiful piece of work. I don't get the implications of the title, though... *perplexed* Hm. Maybe I'm too innocent for my own good. :) Anyways, this was wonderful! I can't wait to read more of your stuff.
DSDragon chapter 1 . 5/23/2002
Rashaka... honey... *shakes head*... *then starts to blush uncontrollably* I was SOOO totally thinking that! Even BEFORE I saw the note you left in your announcement at CW! Great poem! Can I put it up at my site? PLEEEEEEEASE? PM me about it, k?
SpikesPet chapter 1 . 5/21/2002
I really like this piece. And no I didn't even notice the title. For once, my mind was NOT in the gutter.
Patricia chapter 1 . 5/21/2002
I think it was *WONDERFUL* you did a good job

writng it ,late at night.

i hope next year everthing works out for S/B