Reviews for syoc
Indigo Halfmoon Dauntless chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Hi, not sure if you're aware, but SYOC stories are against the rules here, simple solution, I have a forum for that kinda thing. find the one in the HoN section called 'outside the box'. there's a charatcer section there.
Storm229 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Name: Grace Adamms

Age: 16

Appearance: Long wavy dark brown hair, forest green eyes with flecks of brown.

Species: Blue Fledgling

Job: (teacher, priestess, random person etc) Student, part of Dark Daughters, represents Earth.

Personality: She's a fun-loving, kind and smart girl. She is wary and cold towards strangers or people that she doesn't know very well but loves all her close friends.

Good or evil: Good

Hobbies: Reading, flirting, listening to music, going for nature walls and hikes, watching movies with friends and participating I'm Dark Daughters rituals.

Other: Can you pair her up with another OC? Thanks! I don't mind which story you out her in :) please pm me when you've decided on which story or if you have any questions about her!

-Storm229
PowerOfIreland chapter 2 . 7/14/2012
Name: Diana Matthews

Age: 16

Appearance: She is short, medium weight. She has orange hair, usually in two pony-tails. She has big blue eyes with pretty eyelashes. She has really light skin. She wears usually black clothes, she is a lot inspired by Avril Lavigne. She loves skirts, patterns and everything with stars and four-leaf clovers. She owns very many Converse shoes. And she loves hats.

Species: Blue Fledgling

Job: Student

Personality: She is bubbly and funny and really optimistic. She is also reaaaaally chatty. Sometimes she might be annoying or too curious, but everyone likes her either. She is brave and she would die for her friends. She likes to be sarcastic.

Good or evil: Good

Hobbies: reading, drawing, writing, acting, fun, friends, adventures, jokes

Other: She has a small orange cat Wendy with blue eyes, she is like a cat version of Diana. Ans she has an affinity of Water element.

Sorry for my English, I am from Slovakia :"D
KShade chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
Name: Willow Pearson

Age: 16

Appearance: Brown hair with highlights, brown eyes, 5'4

Species: red fledgling

Job: (teacher, priestess, random person etc)

Personality: Shy, but planning something usually. People don't eve suspect quiet little Willow.
Good or evil: evil

Hobbies: Archery

Other:No cat has chosen her, they can see the evil in her.

PM Me if you need more info/ another character.
KShade chapter 2 . 6/25/2012
i didn't login...

name: Lara Marson

appearance: white blonde hair,vivid green eyes, goth

age:19

species: blue fledgling

on the fence between light and darkness

personality: complicated, mysterious shyish

background: amnesia, can't remember

affinity: she can freeze time

no cat

hobbies: reading

other:-

PM me if you decide not to use her, because if you won't i will
jnl94 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Don't have a FF, but thought I'd stop by and see what you had going over here and decided to drop off a character while I was here, lol.

Name: Carly Preston

Age: 17

Appearance: Long curly brown hair, large green eyes, medium height

Species: Blue Fledgling

Job: Student

Personality: She is extremely loyal to those close to her and has been known to get into a few fights in her time. She's smart, but doesn't flaunt it and she is althletic. Not really considered "popular" because she hates how shallow they are. She can somtimes be seen as weird because she says what she's thinking, no matter how odd. She can be a bit of a flirt in her spare time and has a tendency to have an attitude but she "can't seem to find a problem with it."

Good or evil: Good

Hobbies: Drawing, swimming, and flirting with boys

Other: She hates pink, can't stand seafood, and secretly loves reading romance novels.
OshowottandSnivvvy chapter 2 . 5/20/2012
Name:Saphiera Raven

Age:17

Appearance:she has long black wavy hair yellowish eyes and a long curvy body that is warrior like

Species: Fledging

Job: (teacher, priestess, random person etc): Random person

Personality:she is cocky arrogent sarcastic(in a mean way) witty headstrong and bitchy but she has a soft side that she doesnt often show

Good or evil: Good

Hobbies:swimming and singing

Other:nope :)
cnmt chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Name: Annabella (Anny)

Age:16

Appearance: long flowing brown hair, stormy grey eyes, and a slim tall figure. Wears jeans and tank top. Her friends can never get her to were a dress.

Species: blue fledgeling (sixth former)

Personality:Smart and artistic. Everyone thinks she is always nice but she can kick some butt if she wants to and if you try to put makeup on her there will be some broken bones.

Good

Hobbies: she loves to draw and play sports. She also likes to fence, so she's good with a sword.

She is also gifted with the ability to save lives.
cnmt chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Name: Annabella (Anny)

Age:16

Appearance: long flowing brown hair, stormy grey eyes, and a slim tall figure. Wears jeans and tank top. Her friends can never get her to were a dress.

Species: blue fledgeling (sixth former)

Personality:Smart and artistic. Everyone thinks she is always nice but she can kick some butt if she wants to and if you try to put makeup on her there will be some broken bones.

Good

Hobbies: she loves to draw and play sports. She also likes to fence, so she's good with a sword.

She is also gifted with the ability to save lives.
Firestorm Runner chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Name: Charlotte Johnson (prefers to be called Charlie)

Age: 17

Appearance: Of a regular height and weight, she has dirty blonde hair that goes straight to the base of her neck and bangs swept to the left over brown eyes. She has rather pointed facial features and typically enjoys wearing cool, flowing clothes (skirts and blouses mostly).

Species: Red fledgling

Job: Student, 5th former

Personality: It's hard to place a real personality on her because she can fall under many categories. She loves acting, so she puts on many faces, as she calls them, being practical one moment, the quiet one, the prankster the next, and the bitchy one the next. Really, it all depends on the day, the time of day, and what she thinks is needed in a group.

However, if told to stop acting, she'd wind up being defensive about being told what to do, and then be a typical, loud, fun-loving girl. And when alone, she's quiet and thoughtful, taking in her surroundings to the point of becoming oblivious to anyone around her.

Good or evil: Good, though depending on when you meet her it may not seem like it at first

Hobbies: Acting, hence her "many personalities" and drawing/sketching.

Other: She has a brown tabby she named Petey. She also has an affinity for empathy through sketching, meaning she can draw a person in such a way that it shows their true emotions and intentions (based on facial expressions and the colors she chooses to draw with), but it's still extremely hard for her to do on a constant level or when it's ordered.

If you need anything more, meaning anything from another character to any explanation/changes to Charlie, just PM me and let me know :).
misszayy-5 2 lazy 2 log in chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Juliet is fire,water,life,& death
Z that alpha and omega chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Sorry I missed something

Blue fledgling

Hobbies singing writing reading playing video games

She fire, water, and spirit affinities
Z the alpha and omega chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Savannah Shade Hunter Smith

15

Student 3rd former

Honey Colored skin dark brown eyes shoulder length tight curly hair

Temperamental, Inquisitive, loyal, hyper, funny and friendly

Good
misszayy-5 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
name: Julietsa Catherine Hollan *nickname-Juliet

age: 16

apperance: long pin straight Jet black hair with hot pink,purple,& sliver streaks thats in a emo bluish-grey nose & pink ,but has curves on her body.52 ft 115 pounds

species: a person who has marks

job: student

personality: Juliet is very shy & hardly talks to when she does its either a sweet comment or sarcastic & sometimes has her moments when she has alot of stress on really she is down to earth person.

good or evil: good

hoobies: she is a and playing her gutair or the piano.