|Reviews for High Flight: Rainbow Dash|
| KnightMysterio chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
Good stuff. I like the setup and the characterization. While the POV switches are a little awkward, it doesn't detract too much from the flow of the story. Well done. :D
| nobodyreallyimportant chapter 2 . 8/27/2013
Sorry it took so long tiger back to you. In any case, on with my thoughts.
It's a really sweet premise, and well written to boot. I do have one issue, though. You kept putting in those POV switches, but it wasn't really a POV switch. The fic was in third person the entire time, so there was only one POV to switch too.
But, even if there were different POVs, it's kinda bad form to label them like that. Sorta detracts from the reading experience, ya know? Like hitting a speed bump in the middle of the road.
Other than all of that, it was a great chapter. Keep up the good work!
| nobodyreallyimportant chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
A very nice story! I liked the little look into Dash's mind and Twi breaking things again. That got a laugh out of me.