|Reviews for The 'Shiny' adventures of Susan and friends|
| finchielover chapter 7 . 4/21/2012
Wow,you weren't kidding about it being long. I liked that magical aspect 4some reason it really goes well in LOST.
| YukiFTW chapter 6 . 4/2/2012
I liked it aside from some spelling errors. Is it me or is there's something going on between Susan and Hurley?
| finchielover chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
I have been reading lost fan fiction for a while , but your story intreged me. but you're spelling needs work and capilizing too. all in all not bad.
Still i think it's risky calling your main character susan, since the whole mary sue stories i've read. Can't wait for more.
| Fred80 chapter 2 . 3/8/2012
Need to read more to judge your story. So please update...