Reviews for An Unobservable Entity
K8 Whitlock chapter 66 . 1/16
Wow... I love the enemy’s to lover trope. Ughh I almost gave up at chapter 10 and boy would I have regretted that!
K8 Whitlock chapter 15 . 1/15
He will survive! Love the reference.
celajwhitney chapter 64 . 12/2/2020
sorry i haven't to view for so many chapters but it was just to exciting to stop! that battle and Peter's yarns were just good to take the time. it figures the Cullen "family" would blame Jasper for being so cruel and vicious and letting Kate torture that asshole for raping her and tearing her apart. not to mention Esme getting whatever she got. not one of them were capable of saving either Bella or Esme but Jasper is the bad guy for getting it done. and Jasper would have done the same thing for Pete if they had taken Char. so poor Jasper should take Bella and give all of them a big F.U. and let them look after their own. but he won't, i just know it.
celajwhitney chapter 51 . 12/1/2020
WOW! this is so much better without Edward or Alice in the story. they were so constantly butting in with "visions" or mind raping others thoughts and commenting to all and sundry about them. so much better.
celajwhitney chapter 46 . 12/1/2020
FINALLY !
celajwhitney chapter 43 . 12/1/2020
OH MY GOD! that was embarrassing. t was also funny as hell.
celajwhitney chapter 32 . 12/1/2020
that was sooo funny!
celajwhitney chapter 31 . 12/1/2020
i can't decide which one of them is a butt cavern, they are both so stubborn and obnoxious.
celajwhitney chapter 14 . 11/30/2020
i am so glad you disposed of Edward and Alice so we don't have to listen to is brooding ass, or he forced "do it my way or else".
Luscious'Golden'Locks chapter 66 . 10/24/2020
I am VERY obsessed with their mating! The story had a slow build and I definitely wanted to pull out my hair at parts but oh boy was it worth it! I loved this story! Thank you for sharing it with the world xxx
WILDSPARK-PRIME chapter 20 . 10/20/2020
I don't think Jasper would appreciate being compared to a button pimple!
Dazzlingsparkle chapter 18 . 10/11/2020
she is boring
Dazzlingsparkle chapter 6 . 10/11/2020
ohh okay? so this marke girl is not chief daughter but the story is the same. Bella is different and the original daughter of chief. interesting
Fealty chapter 1 . 8/27/2020
Hello from 2020 - I just binged this entire story over the course of a day and a half. Thank you for writing it, it's been every ounce enjoyable and it'll be hard for me to walk away from this story's version of the characters.
ACD chapter 66 . 7/20/2020
This was great character development and so different. Love the ending too. Thanks.
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