|Reviews for An Unobservable Entity|
| TheDarkestQueen chapter 66 . 2/11
Just letting you know that I absolutely loved your story :)
| suesacrab chapter 50 . 2/5
The best chapter of all time. From any book, ff. , magazine etc. EVER.
| Mischief101 chapter 66 . 1/31
When I read the "summary" I assumed it was Jasper talking. It doesn't really tell you what the story is about and I just kept passing on it.
However I am running out of Bella/Jasper stories to read so I decided to give it a chance.
It is a very unique story. Seeing the way Bella dealt with being a vampire without knowing she was a vampire was incredible. And at times funny.
I liked that Alice was killed off. That way there was no drama from her.
The relationship between Jasper and Bella was wonderful. Both the good and the bad. I loved it all.
The entire story was well written with a great plot. You did an amazing job.
| Mr. Shy Rockstar chapter 66 . 1/24
I absolutely LOVED this story from start to finish. It was not only magnifeciently written but truly well detailed and emotion-bidding. I felt like I was there with Bella and Jasper every step of the way through their long story of basically enemies to strangers to friends then lovers. The pure love they both obviously have for each other and how in the end they can start to use each others gifts. Considering the two gifts they are both blessed with I think that could be pretty epic in the future :)
I loved this story. I loved your characters. I loved the well thought out detail and planning and obvious attention to your characters growths within this story. If I could print this story as a book I would parade it to EVERYONE. Since I can't I'll just do my best to force others to read it anyways. Because its. fucking. AWESOME.
| kantorkan chapter 53 . 1/22
The Major is out to 't think those idiots are going to be to happy about that.
| kantorkan chapter 51 . 1/22
Well that's a ego basher right there . but in a good way. i guess.
| kantorkan chapter 48 . 1/22
That was one of the best Lemony goodnesses i have ever read,surprised you didn't break the keyboard when you were typing it.
| kantorkan chapter 46 . 1/22
Damn i wish this stuff didn't make me cry.
| kantorkan chapter 45 . 1/22
I cannot believe that they were killed i could see them killing Emo's human as punishment for both of them and then forcing Emo and Alice to join the Guard as much as Aro wanted both of them as his toys.
| kantorkan chapter 44 . 1/22
I cannot believe that Kate doesn't know about the Mating bite and the pull between the couple.
| kantorkan chapter 43 . 1/22
Now she can tell them what in the hell is going on between them,when she stops laughing.
| kantorkan chapter 41 . 1/22
I can't believe that Jasper does not know what a mating bite is,i know Bella doesn't no one has probably thought to tell about it .hopefully when she see Kate she will clear it all up.
| kantorkan chapter 40 . 1/22
About time. hope they aren't going to get weird again afterwards.
| kantorkan chapter 39 . 1/22
When will they stop doing this Kabuki Dance and realize they need each other?
| kantorkan chapter 38 . 1/22
I have thought of Vampiraism as a parasite,probably of alien source that came to Earth many thousands of years takes over the host body which is the only way it can survive in a hostile environment and it depends on how strong the host is ,how much control it has over said host.