Reviews for An Unobservable Entity
Whexasian4lyfe chapter 66 . 4/18
My GOD, I loved this story! I am unabashedly Jasper & Bella trash and I obsessively consume "new" works once I come across them, that being said I have just finished binge reading your story and hopefully will be able to pump this out in a semi-coherent manner. This was just so refreshing, the story you created was so unique and I cannot even begin to imagine how you come up with the ideas that you do and I wish I had found this when you were in the writing process that way I could have picked your brain. I love the insight given to both Jasper and Bella, both together and individually, you took two other worldly characters and made them distinctly human in a way that I think a lot of us cannot yet strive to emulate. Thank you very much for writing this and for sharing it with us all, those of us that can appreciate it are all the better for it.
Charlie0925 chapter 66 . 3/18
I LOVED, LOVED, LOVED THIS FIC! Awesome, awesome writing here honey! I loved every second of this, and still cannot stop laughing over Bella's book idea "Traveling with my Asshole", LOL! ;o)
Guest chapter 21 . 1/3
With friends like Carlisle, who needs enemies?
Guest chapter 19 . 1/3
Why the hell would Jasper even dream that Bella might want to be within 1,000 miles of his stupid ass?
Guest chapter 16 . 1/3
This is supposed to be a romance? Jasper is nothing but an asshole. I hope she tells the rest of them what he said. They all need to know he's a useless jerk.
Kristina777 chapter 66 . 12/12/2016
Wow...I can't believe how amazing this story was. I felt like I was right there with the characters.
CentauRita chapter 66 . 11/13/2016
Bella's famous line...

"Eek!"
**sighing, out loud**
At The End of another Awesomely Wonderful B/J Story.

Thank you for sharing your talented mad writing skills, your precious time & most certainly your beautiful entertaining characters.

Hoping all is 'write' in your world D

Take Care,
Rita, NorCal Gal
Nicoconsd chapter 66 . 11/2/2016
I'm so excited I found your story. I thought I had read almost all the great Jasper Bella stories but am so glad that I found this and it was so fun. I really liked the creative way you worked with Alice and Edward. I strangely kept saying to myself when is Bella going to mark Jasper's fine ass with a bite of her own! hehe I mean the girls need to be warned off too right? I loved the journey that Bella had to go through to find her way even before she ran into the cullen's again and when she called her dad... oh man heart breaking! I am really looking forward to reading your other stories :)
call us crazy chapter 66 . 10/23/2016
i laughed, i cried, i fell in love with this entire story. truly, i thank you.
Salinia chapter 66 . 10/23/2016
This story was amazing!
Going in my favs!
bearygirl chapter 66 . 10/14/2016
Really enjoyed reading this story, thanks for sharing.
Picky Reader 654 chapter 66 . 10/11/2016
This was another perfect story. I’m not easily hooked into Vampire Bella fanfiction, but your writing style is clean and your grammar flows so smoothly that I’m absorbed into the story. Cornell was a fascinating character that mirrors Jasper in so many ways; his struggle with Bella made me sympathies for him and the fallout was tragic to read. I’m looking forward to reading your J/B trilogy.
Thank you so much for your time and dedication in writing these amazing stories.
Lucyferina chapter 66 . 6/12/2016
Loved it
Zoey101fan3600 chapter 66 . 6/2/2016
i loved it
Zoey101fan3600 chapter 65 . 6/2/2016
Aww I'm happy everything turned out happy in the end
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