|Reviews for 86 Missing Scene, Solar Systems|
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Wow. I love this fic! Its so well written, very nice. I do hope you write more soon. Great job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
'entering another solar system'
Let me say that I have really really really appreciated this FIC!
It is so well written and so Smart and I love it! It was so interesting to be' in jenny's mind and follow what happen at the very beginning of jenny and emma's story!
So, I hope you Will gift us with another one!
| Carolyn1202 chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Loved listening to Jenny's observations of the "solar systems" around her . Very clever metaphor !
I loved being in Jenny's head while she is taking her first notices of Emma without remembering her name. At this point in their story it's lovely because you see Jenny's first attraction to Emma before Jenny is aware she is even attracted to her , she's just noticing her. I love it. You write very descriptively which I enjoy. Thanks for having another go at a one shot in English. I am off to go read it again.