Reviews for Avatar Cat: The Last AirClan Cat: Spring
Guest chapter 7 . 11/3/2012
Umm... You DO know that Lin is the name of Toph's daughter, right? Oh, by the way, love your fanfic!
-Moonstar
WyldClaw chapter 22 . 7/21/2012
wow! I felt like i was right there with goldwing as he encountered his past lives
Kyuubi No Tenshi chapter 21 . 7/19/2012
Nice ending. Can't wait for the next one.

Can I get a Katara or Aang plushy?
fanfic meister chapter 15 . 6/14/2012
Hello there. Boulderclan is definitely hiding a lot of secrets, dark secrets of the War and their cats are too scared too talk about it, so they just convince themselves that Boulderclan is the safest place from Fireclan even there are a lot of rogues and refugees.

Longfang, Boulderclan's deputy, seems to be charismatic and caring but in reality he is also manipulative. The true nature of Boulderclan is that the leader of Boulderclan is just a political figurehead.
Ranmyaku Arashi chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
I though it said Avatar Bobcat Goldwaith for a moment.

I am disappointed. :(
fanfic meister chapter 12 . 5/18/2012
Losing Archie to a group of Sandbending cats really took a toll to our heroes especially to Goldwing. His wrath was so great he nearly devastated everything on his path, of course Silverheart calmed him down like in the Southern Air Clan.

Bearclaw and his uncle Irontail with the help of the mysterious Order of the Phoenix help them with tickets to go undercover to Boulderclan as loners (refugees).
fanfic meister chapter 10 . 5/2/2012
Earthbending is definitely the opposite element of Goldwing's nature. Since earth is being blunt and stubborn, Goldwing had to be like the earth itself. Nightpaw just made him go through the extreme just to make him finally earthbend.
fanfic meister chapter 7 . 5/2/2012
Ahhh, so before becoming receiving her apprentice name she was name Lin Bei Fong. You used Lin for the character of Legend of Korra who is now Toph's daughter and now Chief of Police of Republic City.

Lin at the end becomes Nightpaw. Good chapter.
fanfic meister chapter 6 . 4/12/2012
And I thought Fireclan were the only enemies of the Avatar Cat. Goldwing is accused of the death of Battlestar (cat form of Chin the Great). A first encounter with the fearsome Dark Dragons and their leader Leopard. Ashfeather loses temporarily his boomerang and his identity (in his mind).

At the almost end, Avatar Cat Heavyrose manifestated and confessed that she did ended Battlestar's life. And just when Goldwing was going to be eaten by a bear, but then the Dark Dragons and Leopard return to claim the town for Darkstar and Fireclan and just to show how cowardly this Mayor Zulu. Zulu quickly changes the punishment wheel to community service because he is unable to fight for himself. Goldwing and his friends in a hard fight save the town from those Dark Dragons.

Although, our heroes will remember this is the worst town they have ever been.

Meanwhile, Bearclaw has decided to separate himself from his uncle Irontail because he needs to find his own way in life.
The Great Detective Mei chapter 7 . 4/12/2012
Hmmm...Isn't Lin the name of Toph's daughter in Legend of Korra?
fanfic meister chapter 4 . 3/28/2012
Aww man, Mudclan is now renamed as Darkclan. Frostfire has now new allies in the form of her old friends.

Rockstar (Bumi) gives the reason to Goldwing why he surrendered Mudclan without a fight. Goldwing now has to find a new Earthbending mentor. At least Mudclan cats could get out of their town safe and sound thanks to Ashfeather's smart plan.

Keep up the good pace.
fanfic meister chapter 3 . 3/28/2012
Good chapter. Ashfeather was being annoyed by the traveling nomad cats, while Goldwing's crush on Silverheart may not be just be a simple crush; it could be love. They learn about how Mudclan was named cats in love from enemy territories.

While Bearclaw and Irontail try to get help, after Irontail ingests poison accidentally. They rather get help from their enemies Earthclan than to get arrested to Frostfire. And I agree with this. Bearclaw starts to learn about the Great War from a normal cat's point of view.

After all the trouble, our heroes finally get to Mudclan not knowing the frightening surprise that awaits them.
Kyuubi No Tenshi chapter 3 . 3/19/2012
I wonder if you based that hippy Shaggy from the Scooby Doo Shaggy. Goldwing, you are a moron when it comes to woman. You can't say stuff like that, if you love them! That's commen knowledge.
fanfic meister chapter 2 . 3/16/2012
Goldwing learned a harsh and valuable of the Avatar Cat State in the flesh. Whitestorm (his previous incarnation) says that although the Avatar Cat state is powerful; it is also where the Avatar Cat is also at the most vulnerable. If an Avatar Cat is killed in Avatar Cat state the rebirth cycle, and the Avatar Cat will cease to exist. Birchbark was still a freakin lunatic in his crazy plan to defeat Darkstar and Fireclan with the Avatar Cat state.

Frostfire, Bearclaw's littermate and sister, was back and not with good intentions. She almost had Irontail and Bearclaw back on the ship to bring them back to Fireclan as prisoners, but her dimwitted captain ruined her plan. Bearclaw and Irontail escaped barely, and now they have no choice but to begin new lives as rogues or outcasts. As they cut of their fur with a dagger as their symbol of severance to Fireclan and Darkstar.

It's good that you're now working on the Book 2 Spring remake with one chapter each.