Reviews for First Night
Tempscire chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Oh, this was so sweet. :)
Idunnowhy chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Thank you for this :) I always wondered how Rose, who was very adamant that her duplicate still wasn't HER doctor, got on. I can imagine the first night must have been horrifying for both of them.
Theresalynnee chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Explicitly raw emotion in this. You write confusion so well. Loved every word of this!
Kelenloth chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Just WOW. I loved that. Really, there is so much honest, realistic emotion here! All of the little issues - like her inspecting him for changes, and both of them panicking whenever the other isn't around. Like them both needing showers - it's just so real, so human. You did a FANTASTIC job. I myself am in the middle of writing a "trip from Norway back to London" fic, but this is SO much better than anything I could ever write! I love it! I think you've painted their relationship really, REALLY well. And the characters are spot-on too. Kudos! And thanks so much for writing/posting this!
CatInFrance chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Ah, that was very sweet! Good job! Very well balanced. I liked it.