Reviews for Breathe
Samuel Hawkins chapter 2 . 1/5/2017
I thoroughly enjoyed this crossover of two of my favorite fandoms. I'm hoping there may be more in the future like it.
One small critique. In section three, paragraph five, there was a bit too much detail concerning the ways of the High Priestess. I understand the references, but it was a large collection to "dump" on the reader all at once.
Other than a few minor spelling or grammar errors, I quite enjoyed the story. Thank you for writing it.