|Reviews for When The First Love Dies|
| creativeactive chapter 9 . 5/16/2013
Piko's life were rally complex... I love the part when he say, "You're cute." to Miki. :D
| creativeactive chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
Yuuma is really cool. I love him pictured in this story!
| creativeactive chapter 4 . 5/15/2013
Oh, the twins are so amazing! I love how they pictured in this story!
| creativeactive chapter 2 . 5/13/2013
This story is amusing... The words are simple but very touching. It feels like I can feel Kaito feeling.
Sorry if my english bad
| bluefang62 chapter 15 . 7/20/2012
anywayz...awsome story, please update soon ok? ok :3
| Ten-Faced chapter 15 . 7/20/2012
The Korean UTAU, right? Well, you updated, so I'm sure everyone is happier right now!
| Mipiko chapter 15 . 7/20/2012
Ppoiyo's also my favorite UTAU (along with Ron, they're tied for #1 now) since his voice is so amazing and soft yet powerful and soothing and. . . I think it's best if we continue that kind of discussion in a PM, don't you agree? XD
Okay, I caved in because I don't believe that my lower lip can handle any more abuse and giggled out loud. Yeah, yeah, people, I'm a strange woman giggling at something from her monitor during her break. It's safe for work (this chapter, that is). Ppoiyo's so cute. Where did all his kuu-ness run off to? XD He was so cute! I didn't believe it when I read your PM, but there it is! I just about died. Ironically, I had an idea about writing something about them in my little head for some time. Thanks to this, I'm definitely going to flesh it out now.
Yeah, life gets like that. I hope it sorts itself out for you and don't push yourself too hard, m'kay?
Am eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
| Mipiko chapter 14 . 7/20/2012
So Miku's nickname is also "Mii-chan"? XD Awww, Lenny, you're adorkable. And Miriam! *squeals* I can totally picture her as the motherly type. And the stern type. I actually shuddered at her threat. She sounds an awful lot like my lovely mama.
Pffft, that's how I get too, Len. But I'm a heavy sleeper, so even if my teacher sounded like a vibrating chainsaw, it wouldn't be enough to wake me up. Ahhh, the stories I could tell. . . U-uh, o-or not! *ahem*
I hope nothing horrible happens to Miki. I mean, whoever Piko's hanging around, one of them knows her face and all and. . . Or, maybe I'm just being overly dramatic. My stupid imagination, always getting ahead and coming up with myriad of ways and stuff. . .
I can't wait to read how the play works out! Sounds like oodles of fun. Welp, onwards to the next chapter!
| Mipiko chapter 13 . 7/20/2012
I'm glad to know that I'm not the only person who doesn't normally see Luka as a particularly Tsun kinda person. Though I gotta say, I love your Luka! She's so creepy but funny, I like it. XD
My lower lip hurts from biting it too hard, I was trying so hard not to giggle at Meiko's exclamation on just how beautiful Gakupo is. Can't blame her, but it was still really funny to picture in my head how the scene was going and seeing her flail in my mind and smack her cheeks were too much for me. . . 'D And I figured that Gakkun would act all gentlemanly like this. I was hoping for that since it does kinda bother me when people make him sound like. . .y'know. . . yeeeeaaaah. . . *sighs*
Luka's pregnant! OMG, I'm so happy for her and Gakkun! *showers them both in confetti* But yeah, Meiko's right, it is kinda weird to say that she's growing a doll inside of her. That, so far, has to be one of the most unique terms for an expecting woman to say. Courtesy of Luka (Zerolr).
Found a few mistakes, but I'm short on time (darn you job! *shakes an angry fist*) but since I've been an awful and irresponsible reviewer, I'm going to make all of that up starting today! I felt awful when I saw your PM and it reminded me that I've forgotten to review (I even made like a thousand little notes in my binder to remember!) after chapter 12. ; A ; I won't repeat this mistake again!
| Sherra-Kaiki chapter 12 . 3/31/2012
Hmm...Kaito is going to find Miku, and Yuuma is going to find Kaito... I wonder how it will fares from now on? (no, i don't mean anything about romance, i mean about future chance meeting)
Neru...i think she is going to be one of your poor victim who dies? Or there is more?
Well, too many questions after reading it, anyway i like the personlity you have given to Gumi. She is... I don't know, another vocaloid who also contians multi-personlity? I think.
I seriously don't think Taito is killed by gang fights. More like he is killed by someone, like the person who took away Yuuma's things, and annonce him killed by involved in gang fights or something like that. Poor Meiko...
Dang, i think this is my longest review i've even wrote. Sorry about it ;
| Mipiko chapter 12 . 3/31/2012
. . .Can I hug you now, Yum-Yum? Please let Mipi give you a hug. D':
Oh my, so dramatic, so depressing, and so effin' GOOD. Oh Lordy lady, you are awesome. And Gumball's here! :D /*shot for another stupid nickname
Well, I kinda forgot to say what I think of her personality, but I can't really say because everytime I use her, she's different, like Miki. In one Fic that stars her, she's paranoid, has abandonment issues, and she was thrown into an asylum at one point, but in another one she's a love-struck stalker-with a crush kind of girl, and then in one one-shot she's kinda shy and then another one she's snarky. . . Yeah, inconsistent I be. XD
But, I digress. . . well, this chapter was actually pretty different because he was actually speaking to you (the reader). I nearly had to do a double take when he said "Lemme explain", because I have Miki say that quite a bit in TL. Maybe too much now that I think about it. . . Never again will I make a BS fic. OTL
Yuuma's and Mizki's dad is evil, a jealous, horrid person. . . But considering just how badly he wanted to be recognized by the spirits, I can understand why he would be jealous of his children. Still. . . That's harsh.
So Taito and the Yamaha's were acquainted with one another? This should be interesting. . .
Well, I'm short on time, but I hope I've said what I caa- Oh, pffft, forgetting something. OTL . . .Well, it felt like it but now I can't remember. OTL
| Mipiko chapter 11 . 3/27/2012
. . . I fuckin' love you. You know, I think you just cured me of my cold. A breath of fresh air I loved this, you have no idea just how much this chapter (even though it's more of a filler) made me happy. Seriously.
Short and sweet (like when you're getting to the last bite of your favorite flavor ice cream on that cone or Popsicle stick or spoon/fork/chopstick), but sooooooo FLUFFY. I can't write fluff to save my life, though, at least fluff that makes you feel warm and smiley and happy like this one. You're just too awesome for words, my dear woman.
. . . I had the urge to want to be in there and be all like,"Mii-chan. . .share?" That ice cream sounds /good/. Screw my illness and diet, I'm gonna go to the supermarket and get me some ice cream, cherries and all that jazz.
But aside from the cuteness and epicness of my top OTP, Y U IGNORE MIKU? I just wanna shake Kaito and have him to just tell her that she can just keep it/burn it/sell it (the fangirls would go wild with that option)/or anything! Yes, I understand his dilemma and why he's so hesitant, but he also knows that she deserves to hear it from him. So why won't you do it, Kai-Kai? D'X At least it's via message, not like your gonna talk to her over the phone of face-to-face. ono
I didn't catch any errors in this, so that's awesome.
The preview. . . Oh my, poor Yum-Yum. . . Okay, there's something fishy going on and I really, really want you more than ever to keep posted about the updates. I shall not miss a single beat of this! I promise you. I want to know what he'll do afterwards, why his family is acting like a bunch of jerkasses to him (could explain why he is the way he is), and hope that he'll find a reason to smile! . . .Okay, that's going too far, one chappie at a time, Mipi. -u-"
P.S. You're gonna write a KaiKi one shot? Lemme know when so I can be the very first to review! Me wanna be first and then add it to my community ASAP! (*A*)/)
I can't wait to read the next update
| Mipiko chapter 10 . 3/27/2012
RONNIE! OMG, I love that Chinese/Japanese Matsudappoiyo's/ppoine's ray of sunshine! (No, seriously, he's supposed to be the happy one). In a way, I kinda don't like the bit about his crush on Rin (when I said he can tolerate kids of that age, I didn't mean it like that. xD ). Ah well. But this is something else that bothers me a bit: Ppoiyo doesn't actually like lollipops that much like Ppoine does, so I can't really see him having one on hand. Something more like a can of blueberry soda would better suit his tastes (if you want me to elaborate on that. . . ), but you got his lazy apathetic attitude spot-on. XD
I could tell what kind of play that Len was doing and that was just perfect, absolutely perfect for the holidays, in my opinion. Depressing? Yes it is, but it was a good story/song and I can't wait to see how Len gets this set up for the day of the performance. I'm just giddy with excitement!
Stalking? Ehmmmmm. . . Meh, in their position, I would have done the same as well. D
You added Miriam! She's one of my favorite female vocal english vocaloid (does that wording sound off or what?)! I wonder if she'll be mentioned again. . . ? Oh well, gotta wait and read! :D
The preview is very suspicious, very suspicious indeed. Does Miku actually see Kaito like that as well? Is her turn on older men too, like Rin (naughty young lady!)? Must go on and read the next chapter!
| Ten-Faced chapter 11 . 3/26/2012
It was short... but so SWEET!
Well, keep them coming, good man/lady/honourable person/author!
| Ten-Faced chapter 10 . 3/25/2012
This story is really well-written, and I am so sorry for not reviewing sooner.
Keep updating and making the readers happy!