Love the name for the Magical Optician - Pince & Ney, a marvelous play on words.

You need to make up your mind first you claim it’s the prologue with nothing there to hook you and then you claim chapter 1. I am sorry the prologue is before chapter 1 it isn’t chapter one but the that you have this you are trying to claim that chapter 1 is the prologue and again I am sorry but that just isn’t true or possible. So which is it?

please update

you better not have abandoned this story

Vivement la suite !

I have started re reading. Very good

At the early beginnings of your chapters when he used a sword where did he get it? It just magically appeared?

this would all make a lot more sense if Harry was the only one to go back in time. i just don't see how Harry has improved so much but genuine had not changed at all from her 11 year old self... she hadn't changed her hair out teeth, she hasn't gotten stronger, she didn't go to gringotts to learn about her heritage even tho she was told that she was related to one and her parents were squibs, she didn't even study or improve herself in the month before Hogwarts which sounds absolutely nothing like her in either timeline. then to get beat up by an 11 year old? the absolute hell?

Following, in hopes that there will be more

Omg I just love this story will there be more

Rated 1/10 for having a stupid idiotic brainless goddess. I don’t know why this nightmare is a popular trope but i hate it and will never understand why anyone would think this is in anyway a good thing.

update please

Please more!

'just hit me with it, don't sugar coat it' and then 'please don't tell me they were involved in this, please...' seriously?

this version of Harry and Hermione are pretty dumb