|Reviews for Predictable|
| Luckybrat452-494 chapter 3 . 12/28/2008
aww i like it its cute and cuddly! ok hot monky sex itsn cuddly its hot but still i liked it
| angeleyes452 chapter 3 . 9/1/2006
that was amazing i loved all three chapters please please tell me your going to update. i can't wait to read more.
| shallowness chapter 3 . 12/10/2003
There seems to be some problem with wonky punctuation in the first two chapters. I don't know if it would be possible to fix them as the story no longer works on NWP.
| LatinChik chapter 3 . 10/20/2002
Loved it, loved it, loved it ,loved it.
| jewls13 chapter 3 . 10/20/2002
ug, stoprefering my to nuns with pens. for some reason my comp says that there is an error and I can't get there. ugg, I miss out of all the good stuff because of it. UGGGGG. nice story btw, but it's lost without the sex, sorry, but its that what the story is about?
| LatinChik chapter 2 . 10/20/2002
Loving it so far, in the first chapter i realliy liked the way they both ended cuddling, and in the second i liked it all
| TKD-Princess chapter 2 . 10/20/2002
You've got to update. Thats an order! j/k
| JetBlack chapter 2 . 9/12/2002
so... ... you going to finish it cause it's really quite a piece of work. I loved max in the first chapter. the second one was strange but it was still good. so... then are you gonna continue or not.
| chocaholic chapter 2 . 6/14/2002
| pemberley chapter 2 . 5/27/2002
Oh oh oh. That happened fast. Oh well, I'm happy with it. Update when you can. Thanks :)
| Brok702 chapter 2 . 5/26/2002
This is very good. Continue writing it. :-)
| Black Angel chapter 2 . 5/26/2002
Oh why did she do that? post more soon!
| rvr chapter 2 . 5/26/2002
awwwwwww write more!
| BashirXena chapter 2 . 5/26/2002
That was so sad. Stupid Max! She just goes and craps on his heart.
| Mija chapter 2 . 5/26/2002
Very straange, but then their relationship is a little strange.