Reviews for I Won't Let Them
Sassyvampmama chapter 20 . 2/28
:) Thanks for sharing
X.summergrey.X chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
wow at the wedding. couldn't say something before. what a dick.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/4/2013
I am sorry to have to say that I never like to stop reading a story half way through no matter how bad it is but this chapter was the final nail in the coffin for me, I am so confused, you keep changing locations without fully explaining, the typos are becoming every other word, from this chapter all I can gather is that your just re writing breaking dawn but with Emmett in Edward's place, also there is no way they would give their baby rose as a middle name...think about it. It's been so confusing and as much as I like the concept I really think you need to slow the pace down its all just too quick and also the characters sound too immature. With some changes and proof reading this story could be great I'm considering giving it one more chapter before giving up!
Liz 1974 chapter 20 . 7/6/2013
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOVE IT
Guest chapter 9 . 6/13/2013
good
babygirl2928259 chapter 20 . 5/17/2013
sad to see the story end... loved it
babygirl2928259 chapter 19 . 5/17/2013
great ;)
babygirl2928259 chapter 18 . 5/17/2013
ang and jacob nice... love it
babygirl2928259 chapter 17 . 5/17/2013
awesome chapter
babygirl2928259 chapter 16 . 5/17/2013
great what do edward and rosalie hope to get? rosalie wont get the babys like she wants they would be killed? edward wont get bella back she will kill him... so what reason would they do this? love it
babygirl2928259 chapter 15 . 5/17/2013
poor angela... gotta love alice...
babygirl2928259 chapter 14 . 5/17/2013
awesome... love it
babygirl2928259 chapter 13 . 5/17/2013
amazing... love it
babygirl2928259 chapter 12 . 5/17/2013
love love love it
babygirl2928259 chapter 11 . 5/17/2013
sweet...
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