|Reviews for Sunshine Sidestories|
| hmm chapter 8 . 3/6
I'd actually find it more interesting if you did some chapters about other people's interactions with Shikako.
| Soulless Traveler chapter 1 . 2/19
This makes my throat itch. I'm not crying
| Aloever chapter 8 . 1/29
That has to suck. You work so hard to bring yourself away from your past and find out it has followed you, without your knowledge...
| Ellen-may chapter 8 . 12/9/2013
You really are a very talented writer and I love DoS :D the side stories add to it in a very nice way, without drawing away attention from your actual story- so well done!
Hahaa I have one piece of advice in writing in third person.. You write incredibly well in first person, and do write well in third person, although sometimes it almost seems a little clunky- I don't know if it's just me, but i think it's the way you tend to repeat the characters full name instead of utilising he or she.
That's just my personal opinion- I think your side stories would almost flow better if you used he or she more often to replace the characters name- try it and see what you think :)
Keep writing :p xx
| BlueCaesar chapter 8 . 11/20/2013
| Nemrut chapter 8 . 11/17/2013
It is really fascinating to see the Konoha administration show professionalism and competence, as one isn't really used to that. Interesting introspective into Anko and Inoichi.
Thank you for sharing this and I hope you are well.
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/14/2013
Never thought about that...
Poor Anko, jeez!
| Kurotiger chapter 8 . 11/14/2013
Anko has always been one of my favourit konouich ( I do believe i spelled that wrong .)
Anyway it was cool reading this, it allows us reader to see behind the scenes of the story.
Keep it up i looked forward to the next page and chapter of Sunshine.
| Ganurath chapter 8 . 11/13/2013
Mitarashi Anko is a crazy awesome character. I hope her seal has been dormant, and that the mind walk doesn't wake it up or hurt Inoichi.
I also hope Anko, at some point in the future, gets a hug. She could use one.
| APatchOfSunlight chapter 8 . 11/12/2013
Lovely to see you alive, oh Silver Queen.
Anko is a wonderful character, she's been through so much and it shows. Broken edges and harsh lines hidden behind devil-may-cry, 'I'm my own woman' attitude. She's another reflection of Naruto, one who stayed loyal, went 'f- you haters' and attempted to live her life even when things went to crap around her. There's a lot to respect about her and you managed to do that writing this snippet.
Thank's for this,
| Juno-nine chapter 8 . 11/11/2013
Yay, yay, yay. So awesome. Thankyou very much for writing this!
| someadskljfadsdj chapter 8 . 11/11/2013
Lovely little chapter.
| FrozenLights chapter 8 . 11/11/2013
Wow, that really sucks for her. After all that time trying to prove herself only to realize that she could be a sleeper.
| Fellow chapter 8 . 11/11/2013
| Ninjagirl2211 chapter 8 . 11/11/2013
If they find a way to remove the cursed seal from Anko - and Sasuke - then it means - had Sasuke left in the first place - he wouldn't have been able to revive Orochimaru in the future. Which he still COULD if things work out differently. Although I'm not sure if that would be a good thing or a bad thing at this point...