Reviews for The Cost of Victory
allestich1 chapter 50 . 9/9/2013
Hi Fulgance!
I'm not really the type who leaves comments, but this is really somthing. It was one of the brilliantest stories I've ever read. You made it so really REAL. Everything was just right. I mean Harry was Harry, Ginny - Ginny and so on. I'm glad I could read your fic.
The only thing I can't accept is the way how Hermione went back to Ron. I mean I understand her relationship with both boys - Draco and Ron -, but still, I just can't accept the though that they never tried. They're so great together.
I feel like telling you that I hated the Epiloge in the original book and while I was reading you story I just hoped that you make them became together. Somehow I still hope. Ahw, I can't even write down properly what I think or feel. You caugth me - you really did. There was that sentence. It went somehow like this: "There present personalities clicked but there's their past." I hate when I can't change things. Okay, that's not true. I should probably say I hate when I don't have the POSSBILITY to change things if I'd wanted to. An it's so true on their poor situation, but I'm sure you've already knew it. Sorry. I'm running in circules because I don't really know what to write to make it a good comment and not something useless.
I loved the way you formed the characters. It seems you always know where to put the emphasis, and I loved that it wasn't just about Hermione and Draco. My absolute favorite storyline was their's - of course -, but the close second was George. Gred & Feorge. In the book they were my favorites and I just can't belive that Fred died. It wasn't fair. They were too good. I hope at least Ange and George made up, but still. It's too bad and it's all your fault, because you made it so real with the deatails. You mentioned every little pieces, you never missed anything and it made your story belivable and wonderfull. I wish it'd had continued, and I also wish it'd be possible to bring Hermione and Draco together. I hope I'll read a lot of great stories from your pen, and I wish you the best. Thank you for the joy and again: Congratulation. Alle
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ladytink534 chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
This made me cry. Emotional trauma at the hands of a fan fic
potterhead27 chapter 3 . 7/31/2013
This was beautiful! *Crying*
Jani chapter 50 . 6/20/2013
This was such a great story! I loved all the different characters, and actually I enjoyed the lack of action-packed plot. It was much more relaxing to read that way instead of having that urge to keep reading, right now, even if you're tired. That's not to say there weren't many great minorish type plots, for each character. I was always happy to see what happened next for the different storylines. Would definitely like to read year two if you do end up writing it. :)
Miss Fantastical7 chapter 23 . 5/17/2013
Ray chapter 2 . 4/21/2013
This was a beautiful scene. I can't wait to read the rest of your story.
Robyn Hawkes chapter 50 . 3/8/2013
I enjoyed your story but I felt you left Alicia's story up in the air.
Robyn Hawkes chapter 28 . 3/6/2013
Yes eery is a word but the most common spelling is eerie.
Robyn Hawkes chapter 19 . 3/6/2013
I've always thought of it as -Al-leesh-a, with th accent on Al. My daughter had a friend by that name and that is how she pronounced it.
Robyn Hawkes chapter 7 . 3/5/2013
Didn't notice any typos. I like your portrayal of Luna, especially when she's cheering up George.
Robyn Hawkes chapter 5 . 3/4/2013
I still think Lucius should be sent to Azkaban.
Robyn Hawkes chapter 3 . 3/4/2013
Well, that made me cry.
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