|Reviews for Lost & Broken|
| ElvishKiwis Venerated Ancestor chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
I like this.
Again I know very little about the genre, but I have read a Final Fantacy vii story by Faylinn Norse which was very cute, so I feel like I know a tiny but about SOME of the characters (oddly enough none of them appear in this story).
Vanille is a very interesting name. Is it two syllables like "van-eel" or three like "vanilla" but with a shwa instead of the a?
| Cassidy S. Waters chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
CS: . . . I didn't see this pairing coming 0-0
Are you gonna get me hooked on another pairing? DX
| PenName22222 chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Very good, nicely done! I can't tell ya how much I love this one-shot. All I gotta say is that Edward truly deserves to have someone look after him, love him, and take care of him. I kinda liked the pairing with Edward/Harley but...there wasn't much there. This story really shows what love is. And in this fic, as it always should, it doesn't show Edward as a helpless scaredy-cat. I'm tired of people picking on him; calling him "Spoony" and stuff.
Plus, it was gr8 to have Fang meet up with Kain and return to Baron redeemed. I don't know much about FFXIII, but I'll look into it.
An awesome story that defines true love. Well done Edward and to you.