|Reviews for Phoenix of Chaos|
| Dogco94 chapter 2 . 7/6
Any plans to continue?
| SakuraKoi chapter 2 . 1/24/2014
| SakuraKoi chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
| syft3land chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
I like the story so far, but the lack of commas in the text makes it a little tiresome to read. It is as if you're trying to say all those long sentences in one breath. One of the most basic writing rules they teach in primary school is that the word 'but' always has a comma in front of it, like this: "I wanted to visit my friend, but I was sick."
The comma is mostly used to give the reader a slight pause mid-sentence, without making one sentence into two.
Again, good story, and the lack of commas is the only problem I've come across.
| airwatcher chapter 2 . 10/30/2012
Loved the story, Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up.
| god of all chapter 2 . 10/19/2012
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
| Ultimate Challenge writer chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
This story really is great the only thing I can't figure out is why guns
| Kur0Kishi chapter 2 . 10/16/2012
Right... good uh.. luck on future chapters.
| jenn008 chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
| jenn008 chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
| michaeldavidgeng chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
interesting story, please finish
| Black Phoenix of Doom chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
good continue writting plz
| darkest magic chapter 2 . 4/1/2012
ok, that was a good start. You need to add more details. Just enough to enhance, but not give away the story. I'll ead you original too and get back to you.
| SeaBreeze2Ga chapter 2 . 3/31/2012
Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens with the wedding and afterwards, I hope you let Remus and Tonks and maybe even Madeye be on Harry's side, keep up the great work, can't wait to read more.
| Penny is wise chapter 2 . 3/28/2012