|Reviews for Be a Lion, Not a Mouse|
| sarzah23 chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
| boo-doh-bag chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Wow! Brittana HP is more awesome that I thought it would be. Really good, wish there were more
| TinyBlackcurrant chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Just… awesome. Mice are adorable, and so are Santana and Brittany. End of. :)
| Rosetoast chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
I'm smiling like a lunatic.
| Your Kaleidoscope Girl chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Aw! I love sweet HP Brittana (:
| milkybear chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I normally stay away from crossoverish fics but um come on you are killing me with feelings.
| 1010'jin chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Okay I lied when I said your other fic was perfect for when I wanted to put a smile on my face-this is because hello? Harry Potter and Brittana cuteness.
| FairytaleOfNewDork chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
This was very cute! Made me smile :)
| L chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
So cute and creative :)
| cuttlefishCuller chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
I love this! But shouldn't this fic be in the Harry Potter/Glee crossover section?
| kinini chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
awesome! i want more glee at hogwarts
| illafant chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Constructing this review is much harder than it usually is, because you are a much better writer than what I usually encounter.
Your prose is subtle and yet precise. The details are all in what is not being said. I feel this story was painstakingly mapped out and if was not, then that speaks about the talent you have.
You set the story and describe all the ways a mouse is lacking, and by the end, the reader should concur a mouse is just a bit shy of absolutely amazing. The reader should conclude Santana is just a bit shy of absolutely amazing and Brittany sees it. Reminds me of the fable about the Lion and the Mouse. The mouse was the only one brave enough to pull a thorn out the lion's paw. I wonder if you thought this through, purposely found an animal that has such a dichotomy.
I like the repetition of some the sentence structures and words, it puts emphasis without you having to get a metaphorical hammer. You introduce new nuances to the story that it flows, your transitions are subtle and further enriching. And your motif, you never lost sight of it and every sentence adds to it. And I like how Brittany reiterates it near the end in such a subtle manner.
"It doesn't matter what your Patronus looks like, San. Your Patronus will be strong as long as the feeling that you use to conjure it is strong itself."
Some stories make me laugh with witty dialogue and laughable antics. Some stories make me cry and cringe with emotional angst and tragedy.
Your story seeps in and settles and makes me feel warm.
Awesome work and I will need to go through the rest of your works. Thank you for sharing your story and I look forward to more of your works.
| ataleoffiction chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Aww, it's so cute. I love HP!Glee stuff.
| I Brave Bee Stings chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
This is pretty much the cutest thing ever and definitely one of the best glee potter crossovers I've read!
| gotanygrapes chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
So, so sweet :) I would die if you wrote a snippet of LT chasing/playing with Santana's mouse patronus hahaha