|Reviews for The Journal Entries|
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/30/2014
Cute chapter. I really like the ending.
| jasmin chapter 6 . 6/30/2014
I love your story so far. It's in character and really has the feel of the game. I especially love your portrayal of Raine. I hope there'll be more intense drama in upcoming chapters though.
| meg chapter 21 . 12/18/2013
Tears. Tears everywhere. This is absolutely perfect. I can't thank you enough for writing this.
| CielFury chapter 8 . 11/23/2012
I LOVE THIS STORY! Very sweet and very endearing. Hope you update soon! _
| YourFinalFantasy chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Great. Not often I've seen a fanfic revolving around Laguna. I find his boyhood self to be realistic and endearing, I look forward to continuing with this story. :)
| tara chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
Pretty good chapter, but I'd prefer if you were a bit more creative and didn't rehash scenes that were in the game. :)
| pinkperson chapter 2 . 3/10/2012
I guess it will be a while before he reveals where they're going :P I liked this chapter. It doesn't seem like there are many stories that give an idea of what the 'army life' was like for Laguna and co. I also liked the explanation for Laguna's choice of weapon and his feelings about it.
I'm guessing that Trepe woman is Quistis's adoptive mother?...that would explain a lot.
Please keep it up :)
| pinkperson chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
I kind of like the idea of Laguna wanting to get out of Esthar and go on an adventure.
And I like how you write Laguna's thought process. It really sounds like him.
"Laguna Loire! Ultimate writer extraordinaire! Not really. More like President of too-many-thoughts-are-in-my-head."
That in particular was cute :) Anyway, this is very promising so far.