Oh nooooo! This was such a sad chapter! They all are so resentful toward him! And now his Bella may be leaving!
*sniffles!*
Heart ya, BB!
{GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee

So wonderful. Missed the action in the mid story, but still glad to have gotten extra time with these characters.

Brings back such bittersweet memories of my moms passing. Sorrow indescribable to lose the one person who understood, accepted and loved me unconditionally from the first day. And as here, she was the best person anyone could ever know, let alone be blessed to call Ma. Yet, some consolation in how, inevitable that we will all have our end, she went in peace, surrounded by love. And how she was recognized, appreciated and treasured she was by all that ever knew her.

Powerful

I'm amazed that Bwould rest w not knowing the full story about Rose.

I loved each of your 183,065 words. If you wrote 77 more chapters about this family, I would read them all. Thank you.

I started reading this to fill in waiting for Deep in the Heart of Me and what an epic filler it was! I read it every waking moment and loved every precious word. Thank- you so so much. Everyone one of your stories touches my heart.

There was mention at the end of the story that you may write an epilogue for 4lls. I searched but could not find anything. Can you tell me if you were able to write that piece and if so where I could find it?

He's such a funny Puritan. God love him. It's essential E.

Such a hunk, the way he is when there is danger. Really a superhero.

Love the marriage advice!

James! Glad he went quick. Thank God for billy. But poor Michael.

Edward smiling and singing to baby j... What a sight. And finding god...

God he's hilarious... Good thing we didn't have chandeliers or surely she'd been swinging from them, nipples hanging in the wind... And Esme clapping her hands like she was beating the dust from her gloves...!

OMG! You're a marriage counselor! That's where the pen name comes from. I've been doing this for years, letting him think it's all his idea. It's said that a man is the head of the house, and it's true. But, the woman is the neck, and the head turns where the neck wants.

What a powerful chapter. Amazing work. Your words paint a picture better than the most accomplished artist could.

That last review was from me, sorry I wasn't signed in. FF logs me out every time I leave the site.