Reviews for Broken Toy Soldier
pugbytheocean chapter 15 . 10/29/2016
this is so good omg
Roia chapter 15 . 3/4/2014
This was amazingly creepy, sweet, and fantastically written. Thank you for the lovely story! :)
Puggle chapter 15 . 4/7/2013
Magnificent. Thank you for sharing.
TheBustyBarmaid chapter 15 . 12/23/2012
Very cute and illuminating.

Just one question. What happen to Moriarty's corpse?

the big sister chapter 15 . 11/7/2012
This was crazy lovely, and exactly the kind of thing I can imagine happening on the real show if they ever tried it. CRAZY LOVELY!
jags chapter 15 . 11/6/2012
Brilliant! Really wonderful. There should be a sequel and if there is please let me know.
oswin-the-girl-who-can chapter 15 . 10/10/2012
This is literally the type of story I've been searching for since joining the fandom. I've always been fascinated by the idea of John and Seb meeting after Sherlock's "death," with Seb using him in some war or the other. And this... this was everything I've wanted and more. I was curling in on myself in horror during the office scene with Seb's "monologue." Anyway, I tend to ramble, but just know that I absolutely love this story with every fiber of my being. Oh, and the end... you had me grinning like an idiot in the middle of my classroom, thanks. I'm off to read more of your wonderful works!
PeaJay chapter 15 . 9/4/2012
I quite enjoyed your story. The creepy Seb was particularly great. Great twist on the Moriarty/Seb relationship as well. :) thanks for writing and sharing.
smiles2go chapter 15 . 6/25/2012
I like Moriarity being Seb's puppet! Kudos for an intruiging idea! of course only Sherlock could fix John. Very well written!
Telula13 chapter 15 . 5/12/2012
What a story! It was really amazing, so twisted and dark but with such emotion and love too. I'm glad it had a happy ending. I loved the whole bit. I'm a real sucker for romance mixed with action/angst. The last couple chapters with the hostage standoff were fantastic and really well done and so were Sherlock's responses.

All around a really fantastic story.
Maddie and Lorna chapter 15 . 5/2/2012
This gave me feelings I haven't felt since the last time I watched Reichenbach at face value.

THE MY FACE. Oh god.

Why can't this be canon? Jim being Seb's puppet? That's a freakin' excellent twist.

I might have made it up in my head, but was Jim as thoroughly drugged/conditioned as John had been during the final stand-off or was he a completely willing partner from the start?
forgetmenotjimmy chapter 15 . 4/29/2012
Excellent fic, exciting and full of emotion, nice one!

The Red Leper chapter 15 . 4/22/2012
Wow. Just wow. I think I threw up in my mouth a little when John had an inkling of what Seb used Moriarty for. I loved what you did for the twist and had it entwined with the real story. I couldn't stop reading this and did it all in one shot! Thank you for writing it!
nofirewithoutsparks chapter 15 . 4/20/2012
You have not yet written a songfic of Coldplay's 'Fix You' with these two boys despite your obvious leanings towards it. SHAME.
Fusterya chapter 15 . 4/11/2012
I have LOVED every single word of all 15 chapters! You are an AMAZING writer and I this FF is one of the most beautiful, frightening and touching I have ever read.

When I read the following lines: "...I'll recondition you. And one day this," he kissed John again, his lips soft and quick against John's mouth, "won't make you do this." He touched John's hand, which was clenched so hard his knuckles were white. John hadn't even realised he'd been making a fist and loosed his hand, his throat tight with something that felt like shame", believe me, I cried.

Sebastian's charachter is perfect, I loved every single twisted thought that passed in his mind... and the ryhthm of the events is breathtaking.

I'm not an author (non so far), but I subscrived the site just to tell you how I liked your story and to put you among my favourite auhtors. Thank you so much for this novel. Don't stop doing this, EVER!
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