|Reviews for The Tabby at the Train Station|
| jjhatter chapter 8 . 6/28/2012
In a word: fantastic! :)
| Cocobutterrox chapter 8 . 6/13/2012
*sniffle sniffle*...last chapter. I shall savor every moment, EVERY WORD! And then read it again and again and again...
Wait, haven't I gone over this already? Haha right...I'll spare you all the 'again's and actually begin to read...
Thanks for the mention :D Expect more reviews from me in the future...and more truncated emails :o
I STILL feel bad for Macavity...he's so misunderstood :(
You know what, those Jellicles were asking for it :( If only Macavity had ONE friend...then all of this would never have happened. Agh sorry I'm done ranting :)
You should write a story about Demeter's stay with Macavity! I could so see that :D I mean, everybody knows that Demeter was kitnapped by Macavity at one point...but I've never actually read a story that was completely centered around Demeter at Macavity's warehouse...
It's funny, I've never seen Cassandra and Exotica being friends with Tanto and Cori...but it makes a lot of sense! Now I'm wondering what a Cassandra/Coricopat pairing would be like...
Pouncival and Tumblebrutus! Twins! AWWW!
It's sad to think that the Jellicles just gave up on finding Demeter :(
AH this is getting creepy...must...read...ON!
WAIT! Let me guess...is it Mungojerrie?
Haha YES! Hehe I haven't guessed right in years...
Aw, Mungojerrie's nice :) I wonder what his story is to getting into the junkyard...
Yes, I am a Plato fan, and super proud of it ;)
AW POOR PLATO! Was this Macavity's doing? Oh, when I find that ginger tom, I'm gonna-
Wow I really need to calm down...
Oh my gosh...that poor cat...how did he die?
Haha real smooth, Jerrie. Cursing in front of adults isn't a very good first-impression.
Grrrr...pollicles...when I find them, I'm gonna take their little necks and-
Wow...I seriously need to...take a nap or something...
It must totally stink to be Macavity's henchcat! The only good out of it is having a roof to stay under! That reminds me...I think I'm gonna read Calico Criminal again...for the fourth time ;) Wait...it might be the fifth haha.
That. Was. ADORABLE. I can't say enough good things about this chapter and the entire story in general. Gah I'm jealous of your writing abilities! I CANNOT wait for your other stories! Publish one soon!
| Cocobutterrox chapter 7 . 6/9/2012
Second-to-last chapter? Awww...Well, at least Macavity's in it!
Good thing this story's in my favorites, so I can revisit it again and again and again...
Anyways, on to the chapter!
AH! I thought Jenny would get caught! I hope neither her nor Skimble will get into too much trouble.
Oh no...if that one lie hurt Skimble that much...then what about when he finds out about all the other lies she made? Oooh...this is getting dramatic...
That's a good way to tell the truth. Haha sorry that was kind of random.
SHOOT! SHOOT SHOOT SHOOT! WHYYY? WHY MUST YOU RUN, SKIMBLE?
If it isn't apparent already, I'm mad at Skimbleshanks :( haha.
SHOOT AGAIN! IT'S MACAVITY! All alone with Jenny. Gah this can not turn out well...ah the suspense is killing me i'm typing so fast now i'm not bothering to capitalize any letters because i want to read more!
Poor Macavity :( Now I'm also mad at the Jellicles :p
DON'T HURT SKIMBLE, even though I'm mad at him...but still!
And NOW I'm mad at Munkustrap...and kind of Demeter...because I still think Demeter should have stayed with Macavity :( I have really weird opinions...
I wonder how this plan will work out. I hope Macavity falls for it. Happy Mac equals Happy World :D haha.
Wait...I just realized something...does Munkustrap know about this plan?
Aw, poor Demeter. And Macavity. And everyone else. Depressed Macavity equals Depressed Junkyard :(
Wow...I just realized that I'm really wacko today. I need to calm down...
SHOOT! NO, I WILL NOT CALM DOWN! IS THE TRAIN STATION ON FIRE? NOOO!
SHOOOOOOT! That's so creepy! Macavity is the fire? IS the fire?
YAY! Aw, it's sweet that Skimbleshanks could catch her scent even when he was unconscious!
I think it's clear that this is one of my favorite chapters :) I can't wait for your next chapter! I'm wondering what Macavity's punishment will be, or if he will run from the junkyard for good. Update soon!
| SunsetWanderer chapter 7 . 6/8/2012
AWWWWWWW! that's so cute! can't wait for the finale! keep it up!
| thatHORRIBLEcat chapter 6 . 5/23/2012
Have a feeling this is all going to blow up in her face REALLY bad. But, what I love about this story is the way you write her character. Jenny has flaw and makes mistakes, it makes her all the more believable and gives room for character development.
Her parents' relationship is so cute too XD
Can't wait for the next one!
| Cocobutterrox chapter 6 . 5/17/2012
New prediction: Skimbleshanks is going to tell Jenny's parents that they went to a pub near the place Jenny works and then they'll be all like 'Huh?' and then THE TRUTH SHALL BE REVEALED! Haha sorry I got a little crazy there :p
COME ON REMGAIL Skimbleshanks is pretty responsible. He worries too much :p But then again, she IS his daughter, so it's understandable.
This is kind of an odd thing to add while I'm halfway through the story, but I seriously cannot stop reading and the suspense you are building up is wonderful :)
Aw, poor Annasta. I would love to learn more about her backstory.
In my opinion, Jenny should wait until her father (hopefully) lifts the ban before she sees Skimble again. I feel like if she sneaks out to see him there'll just be more trouble.
Oh, that's just great. Another lie. Yes, I'm sure that'll fix everything, Jenny. Just LIE again! This cannot be good...
Hm, very interesting last sentence, saying that she felt "happier and guiltier" at the same time. Hm...
Another wonderful chapter! I'm afraid Remgail will find out that Jenny is sneaking out, though. Update soon!
| thatHORRIBLEcat chapter 5 . 5/5/2012
Awww that kiss was so sweet. Love this couple and how you write them :)
I'm worried about what'll happen with Macavity though. Of course, Jenny did the right thing, but I'm afraid for Skimble now!
C'mon, Jenny tell Skimble the truth! Or else it'll blow up in your face soon...
Anyways, great chapter can't wait for the next one!
| Cocobutterrox chapter 5 . 5/5/2012
Aw, Demeter and Munkustrap are so cute together :)
I wonder if Jenny is annoyed whenever people ask her about her and Skimbleshanks or if she is happy to tell them everything...hm...So far it seems like she doesn't want to tell people much, but I wonder why...maybe she's still not that interested in having a tomfriend...
I feel so bad for Macavity...it's like he's in prison...
Okay, now I'M wondering what he means when he says "needing it". Very, very suspicious. Macavity has been suspicious a lot in this story haha. It's totally in-character, of course :)
AHHHHHHH! Jenny told the secret! No! Macavity is most definitely NOT going to like that...
So by "needing it" does he mean needing drugs?
Oh, yeah, I forgot about Mac's magic. Yeah, that is probably not going to help Jenny out...or Skimble...
Okay, I'm going to make a prediction...Jenny is going to get drunk and accidentally tell Skimble the truth about what she does for a living.
Good point, Jelly...haha.
"Instead of bathing everything in orange and gold, the sky and ground simply got darker." Oooh, is this a hint of foreshadowing I see? Nice touch.
NO MORE LIES, JENNY! TELL HIM THE TRUTH! Agh, sorry. I can see how at this point it would be really difficult to tell the truth. Poor Jenny!
Please don't get into a fight, Skimble!
WHAT IS WRONG WITH ANUBIS!
Aw, no! Not a fight! Well...my prediction didn't actually happen, but this is just as bad! Poor Skimbleshanks!
Whoa, Anubis is magical! So all that disappearing and reappearing and hypnotizing was all magic! Whoa...mind-blowing...
Skimbleshanks is lucky his queenfriend is a nurse! I bet he feels real thankful now.
Aw, poor Jenny (again).
Awwww, what a sweet ending! And another wonderful chapter! I wonder what will happen next. Update soon, please :)
| Cocobutterrox chapter 4 . 4/12/2012
Oh no...I'm guessing Macavity found out about Munkustrap and Demeter, huh? Oh...Munkustrap's really going to get it now...and I hope nothing too bad happens to Demeter :(
Ooooh, Munku should NOT have said that.
AHHHHH NO! EC, I can't believe Macavity just electrocuted his own brother! He does NOT deserve Demeter.
Hmm...I wonder who Demeter will choose-Munkustrap or Macavity. I always think Demeter and Macavity are a cute pairing, but judging my the way Macavity has been acting, maybe it would be best for her not to go back to him...I'm sure at one point or another, he'll hurt her, too.
Interesting-Old Deuteronomy is putting Macavity on den arrest! It's like a police officer arresting his own son!
I think I said this sometime before...but when you write something like this-"Skimble carried you five blocks from the train station? If that's not chivalry, I don't know what is. I think it's finally happened, Jenny." Jelly said with an air of seriousness to her voice.-then the period after "Jenny" should be a comma followed by the closing quotations. Sorry, was that confusing? Anyway, it's just a small note about mechanics and punctuation and stuff, so it's no big deal.
Aw, that story with Jellylorum and Gus was so sweet :)
I bet at one point or another Jenny's lie will get too out of hand. She must really regret it :( Jenny really should tell him before he finds out himself, because then he would actually appreciate her honesty.
Very nice ending :) I'm so torn by Macavity. I don't know if Demeter should choose him or not. Munku wouldn't be half-bad either, though. But I'm sure Macavity is going to do something so horrible that it will totally mess-up their relationship.
Great chapter! Update soon!
| anon chapter 4 . 4/11/2012
Aww this is such a cute story :)
| Cookie05 chapter 4 . 4/11/2012
I wonder how Jenny is going to break it to Skimble
| Cookie05 chapter 3 . 4/1/2012
| Cocobutterrox chapter 3 . 4/1/2012
"Who let THAT in here?" favorite line :)
Poor Jenny! Her parents are so embarrassing haha. Very parent-like.
Jelly's character is developing very nicely! It's so interesting to see how much she has changed from being an eager, cheery queen to an uptight adult.
I don't exactly have anything to critique on. You are an amazing writer! I just have one mechanical note: Places like "'We'd like to know just who caught our daughter's fancy.' Jenny's mother suggested..." and "'I'm just not used to being as excited about toms as you are, that's all.' She mumbled..." should probably be written as "'We'd like to know just who caught our daughter's fancy,' Jenny's mother suggested..." and "'I'm just not used to being as excited about toms as you are, that's all,' she mumbled..." and just a few other places. Sorry, I didn't mean to make that confusing.
Ooooh Munk and Dem...what's Macavity going to do when he finds out they have been hanging out with each other?
Ooooooooh "disturbing"...hahaha I wonder what it is...something to do with Mac, I'm sure...
Whoa whoa whoa. "Dumb"? Mac has disappointed me once again.
Aw...I actually kind of feel bad for Macavity. He has a problem with drugs :( I hope he gets over it.
The ending was both sad and sweet. I was afraid Skimbleshanks was going to find out that Jenny was lying after a conversation with her parents, but I'm relieved that he didn't!
Oh, plus, I like the names you give your OCs :)
Wonderful chapter! Update soon, please!
| Cocobutterrox chapter 2 . 3/28/2012
Oh, Macavity-I'm still mad at you :p haha
Oh, come on! I really doubt Macavity was "held captive." Psh! I know you're up to something Macavity, and I'm going to find out what...
Yeah, I totally agree with you, Jenny. There is definitely something wrong with that cat...
Oh, no, Jenny, don't lie! She's going to regret saying that later!
Now that I think of it, the violin suits Skimbleshanks very nicely :)
Aw, their date went very smoothly (except for when Jenny LIED!) Now I'm just worried about how the next date will go...and what Macavity's up to...I seriously can't wait for the next chapter! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! Update soon :)
| Cocobutterrox chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Poor Jenny :( She doesn't have any time for fun. That must really stink haha.
Jennyanydots and Coricopat...*shudder* haha yeah Skimbleshanks is definitely the one for Jenny.
I bet Jenny is pretty embarrassed with all this talk about tomfriends with her parents. Her life seems so hard!
OMEC Mac has...business? In the city? In a dingy alley? Very, very suspicious...Oh, it's just two hobos. Well, still, it's pretty suspicious...
Oooh Macavity's the Jellicle Protector? I find that to be AWESOME! Haha sorry I write really crazy reviews.
NO! Macavity lost!
Oh, come on, Macavity? You just left Jenny and Jelly? Seriously? I thought you were better than that :(
I love this line; it made me crack up!: "'Please excuse him, he's a ladies' tom. Don't let his stupid charm fool you.'"
Oooooh Skimble likes Jenny! I wonder if he knows if she likes him back.
I also wanted to just say that "The Calico Criminal" was one of the most brilliant stories I have ever read. Seriously, I am obsessed with it. The writing was incredible, and the action was nail-biting. I'm so sad that it's over, but now I have this story to look forward to! I am seriously impressed by your writing skills, and I don't exactly have critique...so yeah. Great job! I'm going to continue reading :) I hope Macavity's okay...unless he's evil.