Reviews for Evenings Light
arsina3 chapter 26 . 4/29/2012
xXxPINKxXx said everything i wanted!

Amazing amazing plot!

unbelievable twists! Espasially that with the fight!

before the figth i Loved you...before the twist i hated was heart breaking... after i loved you back again! :)

You cost me the loss of a whole night something that haven't been done over a book for years!

The only thing i can do is to put you in my favorite authors dear! why there is no rating in this site? ha?

waiting for the last 3 chapters!
thunderstruckk chapter 26 . 4/28/2012
I am really excited that you are writing fast- and they are long chapters! So in return, I will "reward" (more like punish) you with an extra long reveiw. I enjoyed how Alice acted in this chapter especially, and I also like how Embry is getting better. Apart from Seth, Embry is my favorite wolf. I can't wait for the end of the story, but I don't want it to end at the same time. Do you know how that feels? Well I do, oxie morons are my whole life! Sue should marry Charlie!- Oh wait did that already happen? One minute let me check...

DA fum da dum da dumdum da dum da dum dA dadadada x4

Okay! I THINK that they are maried.. If im wrong IM SO SORRY! LOL anyways, I really love your story, its one of the stories that I actually are to remember what it's about. Lie sometimes I look in my inbox and I read the story summary is about and I'm like.. what is this? ROFL... wait is it ROTFL... i mean (rolling on the floor laughing)crap.. I don't even know that.. I blame you for my sad life... JK...

Well... keep writing...

kiwihipp chapter 26 . 4/28/2012
Oh, that was a good chapter! Poor Embry for having to have all the pain and being sea sick after phasing! Poor Bella and Jasper when they smelled that poor innocent trucker. Great that they did not cause any trouble.
DutchGirl01 chapter 26 . 4/28/2012
Really enjoyed this chapter, can't wait what happens next.
Antara93 chapter 25 . 4/24/2012
awesome update do cont soon
thunderstruckk chapter 25 . 4/24/2012
I love you for many reasons:

1.) you update quicker than most fanfictions THANK YOU!



-you have good spelling

-your characters are NORMAL

-your plot is spectacular

-you have good grammar

-your chapters are long!


~ xXxPINKxXx
Danni1664 chapter 25 . 4/24/2012
So "Options" ...Loved it. Glad to see everyone is back toegether and that Charlie AND Bella are both spared! I bet most people forgot about Bella blabbing! But poor Embry is not out of the woods yet, excited to see how that unfolds and especially considering they are speed boating it across the Ocean! Interesting to read that The Romanians wanted The Cullens to join them in the "running" of the vampire world. I can only assume that this is a tactic from The Romanians, you know "keep your friends close but your enemies closer". After all The Romanians have every right to fear The Cullens especially considering they just destroyed The Volturi (with the help of others of course). Also are The Romanians really to be trusted with the balance of power now very much in their favour! All these questions, I guess I'll just have to continue reading to find out how it all goes down. Excellent Book can't fault it!
kiwihipp chapter 25 . 4/24/2012
So nice to read a happy chapter at last! Glad that Charlie (and Bella) were allowed to stay alive. I had totally forgotten that Bella could be held liable as well. Now I just hope that they all get back safely to Renesmee and Forks.
DutchGirl01 chapter 25 . 4/24/2012
Another great chapter, good work!
kiwihipp chapter 24 . 4/20/2012
Poor Charlie, having to go through driving in a stolen Maserati! For a Chief of Police, that must have been really hard. Edward is really naughty, but, again, who can blame him after all the stress? I hope they get back safely to Forks all of them.
kiwihipp chapter 23 . 4/20/2012
Phew! That was a cliff hanger all right! I really thought that Sulpicia would have killed Charlie. Poor Alice, to be so thirsty, that she would have attacked Charlie, if given the chance. She would have been devastated if that had happened. Just as well that Bella could control herself.
Antara93 chapter 24 . 4/19/2012
great ff plzzz cont soon cant wait 2 read d next part
Danni1664 chapter 24 . 4/19/2012
Nice chapter...I do like a good wind down in a book. Not too lengthy. I like that you as a writer just know that Charlie is gonna ask Bella a ton of questions that he already has some of the answers to. Bella just keeps showing more and more restraint for the thirst which is so fitting to her strong willed personality. Then we have the insatiable hunger that Edward and Bella have for eachother. Beautiful Pistoia!

thunderstruckk chapter 23 . 4/17/2012
I am astounded...(I know a big word) on how fast you update! I hate when people take forever, though I shouldn't complain since I take forever also. Any ways, I always look forward to reading your writing, It is amazing and flabbergasting (Another big word!)

Lovw ~PINK1111
allingoodfun chapter 23 . 4/17/2012
I know "Fate" was a pretty dark chapter...but I didn't know how to make something that came from Aro bright and cheery. I hope I didn't disappoint many of you. We have some sweet times up ahead...and someone we still don't know what's going to happen to. For those who are still hanging with the story...a huge THANK YOU!
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